After a long day on the farm you want nothing more than to relax in the shade with an ice cold drink. However things don't go to plan when a certian country girl decides to join you...
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This was cute, but there were a couple of grammar problems. Mostly using the word "where" in place of "were."
Still, nice little story, 4/5.
Good, wonder what happens next
that was indeed cute
cute!!
now
ROLL THE NEXT CLIP STEVEN!!!
It was like a softcore clop fic. Very nicely done except for grammar. I give you a 4.5.
d'aw
...oh yeeaaah
That was so cute, I could just cry!
But I won't. *troll*
I really want to know what happens next!
This is a cute. This is a loving apple-bucking roleplay cute.
ROLL THE NEXT CLIP STEVEN!
This was indeed a cute reading. There's not a whole lot like this, yes, some error, but can easily be fixed. I hope to see more soon.
Cute. Quite intimate and almost romantic without being poor taste. Well done good sir!
wheres the next chapter?
Very nice.
Well done.
lol
2 tobuscus references?
that's a win
a i recognize what is actually being referenced win
ROLL THE NEXT CLIP STEVEN!!
that is all
kthanxbai
210496
WONDERFUL! Someone knows Toby!
And this was cute, but if it gets clopfic-ish, I'mma get mad. You really should continue, though.
Great!
why oh why did I have to do A FRICKING TOBY REFERENCE!!!!!
NOW EVERYONE IS DOING IT!!!
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Cool to see this on FimFiction. Short and sweet.
Even as someone who can't stand Applejack at all as a character, I must admit that it's a really nice, sweet romance.
There were some frustrating formatting and grammar issues, though, so I'd say maybe four out of five. But, really, I liked it!
Do you not know the difference between the words "where" and "were"? Good story and all but I can't stand spelling mistakes like that!
I thought they had hooves? Or is this an HiE romance? Hmmm...
Well that went well for him.