Fires are breaking out over Manehattan, and Blossomforth alongside the rest of the weather patrol is feeling the effects of taking both tasks on. The sometimes forgetful pegasus finds herself nearing her limit as she puts the latest fire at the Manehattan Library.
Twilight finding no solace in her beloved books threatened or her friend overworked decides to take up the task of finding the illusive firestarter.
Can the duo figure out and stop the firestarter or watch their prized city be set aflame.....and what's a filly have to do with their investigation?
Take place in the manehattan verse two weeks after Tangerine's Sashay of Power.
Chapters (2)
So this is the fourth Manehattan Cutie Mark Crusader?
Your first story for this universe is looking good so far. I'm liking your introduction of Firecracker, and I wonder how the rest of the CMC will meet up with her. I hope to see more.
I'm seeing a lot of grammer and spelling errors in this story. Also, it seems kind of rushed like you said to get it out.
You have a good start, be sure to proofread this stuff and double check before publishing.
From now on, "Buttercup" is the name for a pony with Blossomforth's description who acts like Fluttershy. Pull it back some.
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I hope this re-edited version fits her character better.
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I know and that's why I redid this chapter, though I know there are still grammatical errors with this chapter.
Now this is much better than the last one. Hopefully can't wait to see more.
So now the library catches on fire...a bit of a short chapter, but it's still good.
4674534 know its short but being able to type on something though will change that.
Okay, catching up on my backlog...
Interesting, mysterious beginning.
God, more fires?