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Apology removed my good pony.
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I just now figuered out how to replay to more then one poster. *claps happily*
Anyway, I hope you do enjoy it, and I do the same thing when I read a new story, I wait on giving feedback and ratings so I can wait.
Looks like SOMEBODY is in the EQD compilation. Go Storm!
(my story is still better!)
Wow, I did it! I beat it! I won! MUAHAHAHAHA!
Anyway review time, whoo-who...
I likes it, but if now one has said it yet it's to long... I mean 10k is hard for me let alone 20k. That's my number one gripe. Second, I didn't care about grammar at all, which there wasn't much to say anything about anyway. Third, you got a good setting all built up for yourself, much like myself. Lastly, I like how you main character isn't a total and complete ass. Anyway, this was a very good story, and I love the humor, the detail, and the over all thing. though the battles were a little choppy here and there it was still good. I might have to read more when it updates!
Congrats, I give you the like.
- Noakwolf, author of Fallout Equestria: Brotherhood, and The Humans Guide to Life in Equestria. (I promoted my fic's lol sorry)
... My brain... my eyes... it took me an hour to read this....
Since when the Super Mutans exist in the Equestrian wasteland? And where are the Alicorns? But this is a good story regardless I'm tracking this
All the video links in this chapter are still working.
I'm rereading it, and I'm glad I am; it's a brilliant story.
Bit of thing to note here:
You mess up the mare's name here. May want to fix that, as well as a few other mistakes I noticed.
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Thanks for catching that. Wow, that was awhile ago, as was your comment. Sorry about that, been super busy of late.
Looks like I'll have to take some time and go over these older chapters to fix a few things along with the song links that are dead. Perhaps when I get back on track.
I heard rather then saw the bullet zip past my ear and the sound of brass impacting flesh. brass not lead?
Do you need more editing help? I don't have a lot of time but I could go over your chapters bit by bit and hell the grammar. There aren't a ton of mistakes but I'm catching about 20 per chapter.
Let me know if you wanted the proof reading.