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Another good chapter . It's still sad what happened to his sister though . Keep it up.
Another great chapter cant wait for more.
You're in the feature box! Yay.
is that mention of a dark grey unicorn with a flaming shield perhaps a reference, TtEoAP?
All the firewall references
Great chapter mate
~Reggie
I saw that TtEoAP reference.
Sneaky sneaky.
Don't think I didn't notice Firewall's cameo. Sadly I can't remember enough of that old, unfinished fic to know the reason behind his reaction to Wild's statement.
And wow, Shadow threw one back at Wild! He's been around her too long.
That perk is kinda overpowered. Takes the challenge out of fighting Deathclaws and other powerful melee foes as long as you have a fast shotgun.
Shouldn't there be a "Discord" tag? He's obviously going to be appearing, and will be playing a big part in this story.
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Yeah, I do like to rub salt in that old wound of his. Something like that's gotta haunt someone for a long time.
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Hopefully it won't be too long of a wait. I keep finding myself writing, then rewriting what I just wrote only to rewrite it again the next day. Curse my osd!
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Yay! Feature box! It seems I always get featured when I put out a new Chapter, which according to someone I spoke with is how the feature box worked. And here I thought I was just being amazing. Not to toot my own horn, but in the EQD Fallout Equestria side story compilation I got listed at the top and the cover art for my story was the picture for the compilation.
Needless to say I was quite pleased.
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Indeed, that was a Firewall reference I tossed in there. I believe it was my second in the story, and to answer your question Chaos, Firewall always got flankhurt whenever a pegasus would shrug with their wings.
TTEOAP was the second fan fiction I read about MLP FiM, right after FoE. It's thanks to Firewalls story that I meet many of my good on line friends (Chaos included tho I rarely get to speak with him or others anymore due to work and writing) as well as those who I have the honor to work with as my editors and pre readers.
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You bring up a good point, up until the cover was finished, his part in this story was a big mystery. Not so much now tho. I'd always figured to include those characters to the list once they made their first appearance, as not to enrage anyone who should come here looking just for that character. Tho, rest assured, he'll be getting added to the character list sometime soon.
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I have been leery of making up my own perks, due to that issue. However if I remember correctly that ones actually from the game so many I should start making up more of my own. Also it's getting to be a pain in the flank to find a useful perk from those in the games.
Well, it only took me a month to respond to all your comments... sweet Celestia's hot flanks I am getting slow in my old age.
Still a lot of that was from going to Bronycon, so now that thats over, I hopefully won't be so slow from now on.
Welp, back to writing.
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Happy to see a new reader, hope you like what I've got going here, and if not I still thank you for giving it a shot.
Hopefully I don't disappoint.
Feedback you say?
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I really appreciate that your enjoying the story, and yes indeed this is my first time seriously writing anything. Oh, I've dabbled in this or that in the past. I started a Star Fox fanfic a LONG time ago but never went further than a single chapter and never posted it up on the internet anyway. It was nowhere near the size of a single Fall of Hope Chapter however.
Over the years I've also written a couple of DnD and a single Werewolf the Apocalypse campaign to play with friends. Tho the later came from a premade adventure from a book so I don't count it specially since one of my friends ruined the ending by using a rocket launcher to blow everything the buck up!
As for the gun errors... I blame Game, my editor. He normally keeps me pretty straight forward with firearms, but he only really started tightening his iron grip on my writing later on as we hadn't known one another very long when I started this. Now he's not afraid to hit me with a rolled up newspaper stand and tell me no I can't do that. I of course respond as any writer would...
"But they do it on TV and in the movies ALLLLL the time..."
I never get away with it thought... so maybe I need a new argument.
Anyway, I may just hold you to that offer for later on in the story, when things start heating up.
Hey, I just gotta say, I love your story man. I actually prefer Fall of Hope to Project Horizons. Having said that, I don't mean to pressure/rush you, but is there any kind of news you can give on the progress of your next chapter? It'd be much appreciated.
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check his blog posts!
Hadn't seen that feature lol, still new to fimfiction.Thanks for pointing it out!
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Yes... I do like to go into a lot of detail, to much I think sometimes. I'll ask my editor and pre reader to keep an eye on it. My editor is always looking for more reasons to beat me with a news paper.
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Huzzah! More Praise for the Praise Throne!
If you haven't already checked my blog post, which you more than likely have the next chapter is finished. It's just needing to go through my editor and pre reader, though both are pretty busy due to work so it maybe a few more days or even a week or more before they can get it finished. I really need to make more effort into getting on skype to check on them from time to time.
Shadow becomeing a transformer now hehehe Roll Out
The bast plan!
Ya NO, no frozen hall hole plz
But a Super Slam melee attack dues sand tham flying (not far but stile)