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the banished world

Queen chrysalis has been banished to another world through magical means how will she survive in a world of cold, ice and humans

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Sagacity

Sagacity #1 · May 15th, 2013 · · ·

You have capitalization problems, run-on sentences, and a serious lack of serial commas.
inb4 "arson, murder, and jaywalking"

dragon outcast

dragon outcast #2 · May 18th, 2013 · · ·

2579484
thats why i need a beta, my editing skills are shocking.

SpiderDungeon

SpiderDungeon #3 · Jun 23rd, 2013 · · ·

I'd be good for editing.
Reasons I think I'd be good:
1) Grammar Nazi
2) Swarmie
3) I don't post them, but I do write stories with almost impeccable grammar.
I know it sounds like I'm tooting my own horn, but I'm giving complete honesty.
(Also, a swarmie is a changeling superfan.)