When a strange thunderstorm rolls through Ezekiel's town, his house gets damaged and he gets hurt. Little did he know that the storm was the result of his idol from MLP:FiM Rainbow Dash. When she saves him, they both find themselves wanting more
who will he choose as permenent lover dash or lura. my bet is on dash. and also, ROBOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTT ON THE RUNNNNNNNNNNN OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
2615592 you need to know that there is still one of age girl to be added into the story, and the 'robot' is more human than machine, so say android maybe? i dunno lol
2615949lol, who knows if he goes with dash, she is hot, but when i finish my cover art, whoo wee, you might want one of the others instead. also, RUN EZEKIEL RUNNNNN FROM THE 15YR OLD ANDROID!!!!!
2615960 tellin ya dude even though the other to are hot this is a once in a lifetime chance to get with dash unless she plans on staying on earth forever with eze cause remember she is the one of the elements of harmony and might i add the best one (who would not want a girl like her). will her friends go looking for her knowing one of there elements is lost.
2616035well, you are right i guess in some ways. i do plan on her staying on earth with eze, and there might be a little bit of commotion back on equestria, but i dont think that far ahead. the other elements dont even know where she went lol, so they dont know where to look. but, things will pan out, this is going to be a long story, so who knows whats to come, just saying, girl on girl, and then even maybe guy with two girls later on down the road. who knows! lol
2616226 Ehh my thing still stands on staying with dash forever. if i met her for real that would be awesome. meeting any of th mlp charecters for real would be awesome (cept trixie or blueblood dont really care for those two). dash is just that awesome to me. you inspire me to try and write my own story but i may need some help thinking of ideas. thinking of two romance ones like this only one with dash and one with a different charecter (maybe viynl). so can you help. ill do the viynl one first btw, there difeerent from your story though the difference being in my stories both ponies are the only ones who love my charecter second difference being the oc is me (self insert just in case you did not know what i meant).
First coment.
Okay lol thats enough:) I like Lura and hope to see lots more of her also good job on the story it seem to be going along realy well.
RELATIONSHIP WITH ALL THE WOMEN/MARES!? another awesome chapter dude keep em up!
who will he choose as permenent lover dash or lura. my bet is on dash. and also, ROBOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTT ON THE RUNNNNNNNNNNN OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
2615592 you need to know that there is still one of age girl to be added into the story, and the 'robot' is more human than machine, so say android maybe? i dunno lol
2615909 ok first i say he still goes with dash cause i would, shes hot as hell
second ANDROIIIIIIIDDDDDDDD ON THE RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN OMGGGGGGGGGGGG RUNNNNNNNNNNNN
2615949lol, who knows if he goes with dash, she is hot, but when i finish my cover art, whoo wee, you might want one of the others instead. also, RUN EZEKIEL RUNNNNN FROM THE 15YR OLD ANDROID!!!!!
2615960 tellin ya dude even though the other to are hot this is a once in a lifetime chance to get with dash unless she plans on staying on earth forever with eze cause remember she is the one of the elements of harmony and might i add the best one (who would not want a girl like her). will her friends go looking for her knowing one of there elements is lost.
2616035well, you are right i guess in some ways. i do plan on her staying on earth with eze, and there might be a little bit of commotion back on equestria, but i dont think that far ahead. the other elements dont even know where she went lol, so they dont know where to look. but, things will pan out, this is going to be a long story, so who knows whats to come, just saying, girl on girl, and then even maybe guy with two girls later on down the road. who knows! lol
2616226 Ehh my thing still stands on staying with dash forever. if i met her for real that would be awesome. meeting any of th mlp charecters for real would be awesome (cept trixie or blueblood dont really care for those two). dash is just that awesome to me. you inspire me to try and write my own story but i may need some help thinking of ideas. thinking of two romance ones like this only one with dash and one with a different charecter (maybe viynl). so can you help. ill do the viynl one first btw, there difeerent from your story though the difference being in my stories both ponies are the only ones who love my charecter second difference being the oc is me (self insert just in case you did not know what i meant).
also is android dangerous and have weapons that she is not aware of,
dashXekiziel or something ftw