When a strange thunderstorm rolls through Ezekiel's town, his house gets damaged and he gets hurt. Little did he know that the storm was the result of his idol from MLP:FiM Rainbow Dash. When she saves him, they both find themselves wanting more
I agree, I feel that it was too rushed. You should wait until later chapters for them to fall in love. Again, the reactions other people had to Dash isn't very realistic. And instead of being okay with being stuck on a completely different planet than her own, make her wonder if she'll see her friends ever again and if she'll ever get back to Equestria.
Pretty good, pretty good indeed.
BiE, romance and sex tag = NO
Can't wait to read more of this.
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I agree, I feel that it was too rushed. You should wait until later chapters for them to fall in love. Again, the reactions other people had to Dash isn't very realistic. And instead of being okay with being stuck on a completely different planet than her own, make her wonder if she'll see her friends ever again and if she'll ever get back to Equestria.
its good to have the kyle we know at his trade again, awesome new story