The Elements of Deception

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Chrysalis is more cunning than you'd think. It was never her intention to succeed in her invasion.

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Knack

Knack #1 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

Hmm...a decent start. I would like to see a bit more, but for a prologue, it's okay. The ending song was a bit off though. I'll give you a watch for now and will be looking forward to future chapters.

Zoegrace1

Zoegrace1 #2 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN

Tomsketchit

Tomsketchit #3 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · ·

Hmm... you've caught my interest, alright.

Eskerata

Eskerata #4 · Dec 11th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Well, I said I'd read your stuff. I wish that you would finish this story. I'm very interested in seeing what the Queen's big plan is. The canon behind the official story is a little baffling to me. The changlings feed off of love, right? (What kind of vitamins does love procure? Does horniness count as a changling-snack? Nyuuchh...I bet someone did clop of that already.) So why does a big blast of it defeat them? Whatevs. Sometimes, fanon is better than canon.
I'll be reading more of your stuff when my Wi-Fi stops giving me the one-bar blues. Upvote from me.

MasterFrasca

MasterFrasca #5 · Mar 4th, 2014 · · ·

Your cover in Ponyville… Is it still intact?

Damn it Lyra... I knew something was up...

RedFire

RedFire #6 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

When I read "Deception", I only thought in one thing:
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NightmareTRXY32

NightmareTRXY32 #7 · Feb 25th, 2016 · · ·

The ending song wasnt bad, seeing that it WAS a continuation of This Day Aria. not bad man. And to think one of my favorite background ponies is A SPY XD.

Illi