I’m planning to rewrite Her Sentence as a Pony because it has gone completely off what I planned.

Or

Should I just finish what I have thought of for it and write an new story as an alternate to HSaaP?

Howling wind and pelting rain batter the duo as they battle against a giant stone golem. For the past twenty minutes, Shade and Cherry Pie had chipped away at the stone behemoth's armor and finally see a crack in its defenses. Cherry Pie pulls a flash grenade from her belt, bites the fuse off to ignite it, and spin-kicks the grenade into the face of the golem.

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What is Shade's real name? Whoever is the first to answer, I will… go with the ship they want for Shade. Deal? Reward is negotiable.

Tell me if there is something out there like this: in the Human world (EqG world), people are waking up with special abilities and supernatural powers. The Main Six decide to investigate the phenomenon and discover that many Equestrian artifacts and villains were sent to their world by Princess Celestia. They decide to find the artifacts and neutralize the old villains of Equestria and the new villains of the Human world.

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Grey sits.
Grey sits in a chair.
Grey sits in a chair as he looks out the window.
Grey sits in a chair as he looks out the window watching the little ponies go about their day.
The adorable, pastel colored, little ponies that call the magical world, he now lives in, home. Grey smiles and sighs contently. How was he going to repay his sister's incredible kindness?
A knock on the door interrupted his plots for revenge.
"Enter," Grey says.

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I'm going to start a second arc.
Should I put the story as "completed" and start a sequel or should I continue the story here and just label the chapters as "Arc Two" (or something similar)? I plan on taking Shade to the Equestria Girls Universe and then she will return to pony Equestria.
I really just want to continue on, but I think it would bring a lot of. . . mixed feelings. People who just like ponies might not want EQU in the story at all and vice versa.

"Death!" Shade shouts as she runs out of her room. She barges through the door across the hall. "Death!" Her eyes grow with horror seeing Death in a compromising position with some kind of object caught in her magic sticking out of her rear. "WHAT THE FUCK!" Shade slams the door close.

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Need help building a ship for Shade. Other wise, I'll just end up chasing my tail.

Romances for Shade:

A) Fluttershy
B) Pinkie Pie
C) Applejack
D) Vinyl
E) Male OC
F) No ship

Those are your choices. Please pick one so I can sleep properly and be able to continue writing.

Debating with me, myself, and I, and we are leaning away from a Shade romance with Princess Luna.

Firstly, the age gap. For Luna, Shade is a young mare and would treat her as a younger, but to Shade, she sees Luna as about the same age/maturity (even if Shade is in the six digit age group benefits of being an immortal demigod, right?).

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Shade cocked a quizzical eyebrow at the dark pink mare befor her.

Once again, Death levitated the instrument to Shade with a beaming grin.

"What are you plotting?" Shade dead panned.

"I love it when you sing, Shade. Except that whole screaming, shouting, stuff you do." Death rolled her hoof as to elaborate.

"I am not singing for you."

Death frowned and shoved the guitar into Shade's chest. "Just take the fucking thing and be happy!"

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Since I am too excited, I decided to use this energy to outline and write before I take a break for some quality gaming. I've been thinking (I know it's dangerous but I can't help it) and have run countless scenarios but I didn't know which one to got with. So whatever votes I do get for whichever option I will go with it.

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