Hopefully, this settles one long-running complaint people had about a certain OC.

Hope you enjoy.

In case my readers of "Equestria: Civil War" skipped the Act in chapter 7 and just sided against it anyway:

1: the Canterlot panel oversees and approves everything Twilight does.

2: Twilight must talk to the panel before allowing anyone to work with her, and must have their OK to do so.

3: anyone who wants to join Twilight must take a mental health test to qualify.

4: anyone working with Twilight on a mission must report to the panel first.

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“That’s enough, Moon Dancer!” Twilight had finally had enough.  “As your friend, I understand your frustration, but as a Princess of Equestria, I order you to cease and desist—”
 
“Sorry, Twilight,” Moon Dancer barked back, “but I reported to Princess Celestia, remember? She outranks you!”
 
At her seat, Princess Celestia heaved a deep sigh and dipped her head down.
 

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And it will only be said once . . .

FLURRY HEART IS AN INFANT!!!

She is not an interdimensional overlord. She is not a murdering sociopath. She is not a gang leader. She is not a wicked monarch. She is not a mutated science project. And she is not an overpowered supervillain.

SHE'S A BABY!!

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Chapter 8 of E:CW is here! Check it out!

Oh, by the way, new chapter of "Equestria: Civil War". No joke, I swear.

A new chapter of "Equestria: Civil War"!

Also, since we have new character tags now, Moon Dancer is finally among the story's tags, so searching for her will yield this story as a result. Hope you enjoy!

First off, to everyone who posted pictures of Flutters and Lapis-chan for me, thank you. It felt so good to have support when I need it. You guys are the best!

Also, I just got back a tentative final cover for an upcoming fic, so that should give me incentive enough to grit my teeth and finish it.

"Should" being the operative word here.

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Chapter 5 of "Equestria: Civil War" is now up, as are the rewrites to chapters 2, 3, and 4. Thunderbolt has taken much of the rage originally given to Celestia, and the Princess is now calmer and more unbiased. Hope you enjoy!

Stay quick, stay sharp, and thanks for reading!

LINK to "Equestria: Civil War" on TVTROPES.ORG!!

It's not much, and they misspelled my name, but still! I find this awesome! I think I've made it at last!

Stay quick, stay sharp, and thanks for reading!

Here's another section from chapter 2:

“Twilight, I haven’t truly had any regrets in helping you realize your potential as a princess until recently,” Celestia continued. “But recounting all of these events, both before and after your ascension, I believe you are a bit too comfortable with your own friendship lessons to know the difference between friendship opportunities and actual threats to Equestria.”

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Here's a clip of a rewrite for chapter 2 of "Equestria: Civil War". I decided to go through with the idea of having a new character take on much of Celestia's position and lines, so as to keep the harshness necessary, but keep Celestia in-character.

Here it is:

“Aww, don’t be such a frowny-puss!” Pinkie chirped. “I don’t think it really was that bad!”

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I picked up "Cap 3" on Blu-ray yesterday and have watched it twice since then. And upon reflection, I'm starting to think the chief concerns with the fic (Celestia's characterization and actions) should be remedied instead of excused.

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New chapter.

Hope it does better. I'm sorry.

Please, people, calm down. As I explained to a reader via PM, Celestia's attitude will be addressed in later chapters. I also ask that you please, look through it again, just to pick up on the other things Celestia said. It's not as though she went "full tyrant" mode here. She's addressing the situation strictly, as strictly as possible to make up for a lack of it in the past, but still fairly enough not to clap Starlight in irons right away. She's not really that OOC. Just coming off a

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I did it! My latest fic finally bumped me up to 800 followers! Thanks to all of you out there who are really enjoying "Equestria: Civil War"! I couldn't have done all this without you!

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YES!!! YES!!! YEEEESSSS!!! I'M BACK, BABY!! LIGHTNINGSWORD IS BACK!!!!!

"Equestria: Civil War" has now begun! Choose a side!

(Artwork by arcanelexicon! Thanks again!)

Also, the twentieth chapter--TWENTIETH!!--of "The Phantom Pony of Everfree" is up. Go read when you get the chance.

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