Alright, ch4's been rewritten. While having all your review's being painful for me to accept, it's been a sufficient motivator to me to improve it.

However, another worry's been on my mind: I just want one, ONE, of the commentors for the first ch4 to look over this one.

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Chapter 3 of (A)mortal is done, and it just has to be preread by Vex and JBL before I upload it.

The chapter's name is Assault and just give me 24 hours from this post and you'll get to find out why. Stay tuned!

(A)mortal will be getting a new chapter in short moment! Thanks to my prereaders Vex and JBL like always!

Less that 3 days since I posted the new story, and already over a hundred likes?

Now if only people took five minutes of their times telling me exactly what they liked about it.