Some outside opinions · 3:49am Jul 13th, 2014
Alright, ch4's been rewritten. While having all your review's being painful for me to accept, it's been a sufficient motivator to me to improve it.
However, another worry's been on my mind: I just want one, ONE, of the commentors for the first ch4 to look over this one.
I don't know if this is a good or bad idea, but I know that this isn't something I should do often. If anyone wants to read through it, I'll PM you the password for the new chapter. I'll only pick one, and I'll be picking the reader at random if there's more than one willing.
Sounds good
Or let everyone who wants to read it, read it. The more, the merrier.
Don't count me in, though. I'm a terrible prereader. I edit.
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But if I let everyone read it, that would just spoil the chapter, and possibly render the new chapter null.
2279868 No, only the people who bother to read the blog -- which, as you can see, is not many.
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Well, it's too late for that, or should I post a new blog post?
2279940 Eh, I don't really care. You're the author.