The Curse of the Middle · 3:15am Feb 4th, 2017
I bet you didn't figure you'd see this story updated in your feed ever.
I bet you didn't figure you'd see this story updated in your feed ever.
Well, Site-16 is now longer cancelled. I have gone through the story itself and fixed all of the issues I had with the story, including the dossiers. I have also developed a fairly good sketch of future events leading up to my planned ending, courtesy of the card holder. I say I have enough details to finish this story hammered out, even though there are a few spots that inevitably require some touch ups.
A bit (by a bit I mean almost 2 months) late, but here is #16!
1. The largest recorded snowflake was in Keogh, MT during year 1887, and was 15 inches wide.
2. One in every five adults believe that aliens are hiding in our planet disguised as humans.
3. There are more possible iterations of a game of chess than there are atoms in the known universe.
4. Chewing gum while you cut an onion will help keep you from crying.
At long last!
I did announce this back a little ways, but this chapter indeed took me much longer than I would have liked. I don't have an excuse for that; I admit I did have this particular section scripted since that Discord conversation.
I'm adding in a new character, and I finished chapter 2 today. I'm starting chapter 3 tomorrow morning, I still need 2 more ocs though
Two great specials from the Rankin/Bass library and two great films from 20th Century-Fox library, featuring many of the screen's greatest talents!
A-X-O-L-O-T-L
My time has come to burn! I invoke the Ancient Power that I may return!
I'll be honest I enjoyed this episode, mostly for the Scootalove parts, It had some awesome Dash/Scootaloo moments, I actually wish we could have learned more about Scootaloo's home life, but that probably won't happen, but one can always dream, anyways this episode Is good but It doesn't beat Sleepless In Ponyville, that one still remains my favourite to this day. sorry I'm late with this post, I've been very, very busy lately.
Is going to the editors! This took way longer than I anticipated, but I am happy that I finally got it done! Sorry for the wait, but so far pre-editing it's 14.5k words so... hopefully it's worth it?
Please no ductape
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When this chapter was originally posted, it was much shorter, and primarily focused on Dewey's interactions with Snowcatcher. Dewdrop's large family was introduced in Snowcatcher's chapter. For the expansion, I wanted to actually shine the spotlight on Dewdrop and her family. We see a bit more of Snowcatcher, too, since their stories are so intertwined.
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It begins...
If it seems like it's been a while since the last chapter update, that's because it has been. But that's not to say I haven't been working on the story. You may recall when I posted Sunny Rays' chapter, I also posted an expansion of Honeybuzz's chapter and noted that I would be expanding most of the earlier chapters.
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Feathermay's as free as a bird now, and this bird you cannot change. I had intended from the start for Feathermay to be a bit of a 'birdbrain' (in this case, being especially interested in birds), and we see a glimpse of that in Business Trip with her pet chicken, Nadine.
So, as you already know, Magenta is in development right now, I already have chapter 1 done, nothing really happens plot wise and give the grounds for the story to begin, chapter 2 is being written, it's supposed to be longer than chapter 1 and introduce the plot, two of the protagonist, and one of the Antagonists. With chapter 2, I'm using a similar thing that Minecraft Story mode did to start its plot. The first three chapters take place on Turbo's birthday (4/14 which is also my birthday)
Guess what guess what guess what?!?!?!
ITS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
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You can stop now crickets