I’m wanting more feedback on my story Child Of Wonder, constructive criticism is always welcome, but please be nice about it, I currently cannot come up with any more ideas for the story. If you have any, please tell me in the comments and I will be making a chapter with your idea.

EChild Of Wonder

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Sad
• Slice of Life

It’s almost been 20 years since Applejack and Stevie got married, and now they are blessed with a beautiful daughter named Melody.

• Alt. Universe
• Spike
• OC
• Main 6
• CMCs
• Cozy Glow

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