This fic was exactly the sort of thing I had hoped for when I pitched this group: a lovely little adventure, unlike anything else on site. As Shrink Laureate eloquently put it:
Hannah Hawes, Shop Assistantmade the best use of the rare story prompt to create a living character and tell an entertaining story. The duo of woman and pegasus allowed for some interesting solutions and some nice character moments; and the second-person view into Hannah's thoughts was used to sell the adventure story.
For myself, I found Hannah to be a delightful and engaging adventuring companion; no mean feat in a story told in the second person perspective. Thus, I send my congratulations to Admiral Biscuit on his win, and invite him to claim his prize.
A second Contest will be posted in the near future. I invite suggestions for a suitable prompt.
As I said in ABG's blog post before I realized that this was the main thread: Congratulations to 6427225!
… Who has been racking up quite a string of contest wins lately. Clearly I need to send some drones to replace him (y'know, as perfectly normal ponies do) and bring even more wins under the Horizon brand.
… Who has been racking up quite a string of contest wins lately. Clearly I need to send some drones to replace him (y'know, as perfectly normal ponies do) and bring even more wins under the Horizon brand.
Greetings my good ladies and gentlemen, on this delightful Spring evening. May you be full of barbecue and beer, as I currently am.
Once again, I would like to thank all the authors who entered our first contest. For the record, the prompt:
With that said, all fics have been read, and Shrink Laureate and I have come to a decision. The winner of the contest is:
Hannah Hawes, Shop Assistant
By
Admiral Biscuit
This fic was exactly the sort of thing I had hoped for when I pitched this group: a lovely little adventure, unlike anything else on site. As Shrink Laureate eloquently put it:
For myself, I found Hannah to be a delightful and engaging adventuring companion; no mean feat in a story told in the second person perspective. Thus, I send my congratulations to Admiral Biscuit on his win, and invite him to claim his prize.
A second Contest will be posted in the near future. I invite suggestions for a suitable prompt.
This was fun. How soon are you thinking of running another one? Presumably not until you have both a prompt and a judge lined up.
6426523
I figured a couple of weeks 'til a month. I don't want to overdo it, but it would be good to keep up momentum.
Congrats!
6426546
Ooh, I've got just the one, if you're willing to review mature (for sex).
6427225
No problem. Please pm me the details and I will write it.
As I said in ABG's blog post before I realized that this was the main thread:
Congratulations to 6427225!
… Who has been racking up quite a string of contest wins lately. Clearly I need to send some drones to replace him (y'know, as perfectly normal ponies do) and bring even more wins under the Horizon brand.
6428346
Thanks!
You'll never have me.