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Ok I am terrible at spelling.
I am terrible at punctuation.
I always jump to the next idea ? without thinking ? what I just wrote.
I take too long in thinking of new ideas.
And I need an editor for stories I still don't want to give up on.
Link to my 2 stories:
1.Secrets Off Stage
2.What If I Knew EVERYTHING
i'm sorry I complain but if you want to help please tell me how to correct it please if you are willing of course

1.Anyway the basic of it is Twilight and a OC I made, Blade are secretly married and have a child together called moonlight but nobody else knows. This takes place at the end of season 6. Also Blade is the Bat king ruler in a far kingdom. Twilight met him when Blade was off with his father, knife to learn to observe other ponies and he snuck out while his father was asleep. And that's when it started. I got some more to put in on the backstory and prophecy.

2. For 'what if I knew EVERYTHING' it begins where Twilight goes back in time me to change the past but ends up a year earlier before she meet the girls. Now Spike and Twilight are off on an adventure and with the new relationship of mother and son. The Discord joins them because he wants to secretly make Fluttershy immortal.

Please help like add comments on where to correct mistakes please! Thanks!

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