Well, here it is. Any takers?

I swear its well written... Birds of a Feather

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I shall have a go, and get back to you!
EDIT: [Le Zoidburg voice]
That story is good!
And you should feel good!
Couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing notable.
As for actual critique? Pfft, I suck at that lol.

623624 I'll give you a review of it if you submit it to Twilight's Library, because then I'll have to.

Ill put it on my things to read list. I have like 60 new chapters to read and 21 stories on standb, but don't worry once I finish what I'm readin now I'll take a gander.

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Oh, of cour-

[Stares at your avatar]

623650 Adorable, isn't it?

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Wait...you faved it already

623661 Yeah, but couldn't get around to reading it just yet.

And you didn't answer my question.

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The answer is quite obvious.

I have a Pinkie Pie 'winning face' spray in TF2. And I spray it everywhere

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And for me, PP is fave Mane 6 (She ties with Twilight)

623624 No.

623624 It receives my stamp of approval!!
…It's worth nothing…

…But it's the thought that counts…?

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That's all that matters!

Thank you!

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Ok.

I liked it. Very nice set up, although if I were you, I'd mix the two prolouges together, but that's personal preference. The characters were written well and the story flowed nicely.

Final Score:

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