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10/10
This is still an excellent story. Did wonder originally how 'Disharmony' knew about Littlepip, but that's explainable because he's an ancient spirit of chaos and, apparently, evil.
Good music choices there. Especially the Joker theme. Seemed to change it's tone at just the right places while I was reading.
Discord's trying to dissuade Shadow from playing his little game. Seems unusual. Wouldn't the game be more fun with more players? But this is coming from a guy that needs to rethink that self-preservation thing.
Well that was an awersome read. I liked your descriptions of Solar Flare and Storm Flicker. They felt pretty spot on to the folks behind them. While a long wait, was worth it in my opinion.
Stormcaller
I have to say, I was a little hesitant to start reading your fic being western-like and all... but that being said...
I have to say that I find it to be freakin' awesome so far (I'm only through Chapter 15). I did curse you a little when you killed his sister , but it did make things more interesting.
Also, just FYI, yours along with a few other fics (original FoE, Project Horizons, Heroes, Murky Number 7, and Pink Eyes) have inspired me to try writing a fic.
Can't wait to see where yours goes until I catch up!
Finally got around to reading this chapter. I know I've said this before, but this is still my favorite Fallout Equestria side-story I've ever read, and we've only now gotten to what i can only assume is the beginning of the main act. Nice music choices, helps set the mood, especially during the entire with Disc- Disharmony.
However, I did spy some mistakes throughout:
"bet"
"access". Assess means to determine the value of something.
Forehooves is one word. This occurs at least twice more.
"its shaft."
"canon". Cannon is the medieval weaponry that shoots metal balls bigger than your head. Or, in Pinkie's case, boatloads of confetti.
"too"
Also, if I may offer a suggestion, you may want to be careful about how much you use ellipses. A good number of times an elipses could have been replaced by a comma or led into its own sentence. Just something to note.
6347683 Oh goodness, we editors are slacking. Though "haft" is correct, just not the "it's". The others I'm not sure how we missed.
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Thanks for that, it always means so much to me when people enjoy my hard work. I just wish I could work a little harder and faster to get these chapters out like I use too.
6234342
Glad to see your still with me Purple. Yes, we'll be learning more about Disharmony as time goes on... understandable since he's the big bad here. Still, I think folks with be surprised with how I'm including him in the story, and still fitting in with another side story.
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Indeed, I'd been waiting to get some use out of the joker theme for awhile, and his brand of insanity suits it I think.
6256778
Glad you liked them, hopefully you won't have to wait another six months for the next chapter.
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Glad your liking it thus far, and yes, your not alone with your dislike of how Chapter 8 ends. Also happy to hear your going to start writing your own story! Take some friendly advice, don't go for big chapters, smaller ones are the way to go, and write a few before you start posting your story, that way you have a buffer built up and can do regular updates.
6347683
Thanks, I'm very happy to hear how highly you rate my story, makes me all warm and fuzzy inside As for the mistakes, I still haven't had time to get to fixing them, but I will soon hopefully.
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Yeah, I was worried at first when my chapters were clocking in at 6-8k per chapter. I thought they "needed" to be longer. But fortunately, perusing a bunch of other stories made it clear that smaller chapters seem to be the norm. Plus, it makes it easier to write. LOL
I am up to a Prologue and 4 chapters already, currently writing the 5th. I am thinking of publishing after that point (and having an editor look it over, of course).
Again, thanks for a great story so far!
6428973 This is one of my favourite stories on site. Why in all the hells would I want to leave?
I very rarely leave comments anywhere, because I'm not so good at constructive criticism. I personally never saw the individual whom I suspect is going by 'Disharmony' as evil, simply unrestricted chaos and anarchy, which is bad for an organised society and the individuals within, but not inherently evil. But that is simply my opinion. And it is also possible that 'Disharmony' is not the individual I, and many others, suspect him to be.
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30 actually, the original is set 200 years after the bombs dropped.
6931014 all the FO:E fics are sat at the same time pip is in say a difrit year the one that is conman is 230 to 250.
+ I head A cold win i posted that SOOOOOO I no did bran
6939983
Wrong, 10 gauge is a bigger caliber than 12. Therefore it has more powder and lead...ie, it's more powerful. Sorry, but no.
Here's a size comparison.
http://www.marlinforum.com/images/1/9/4/6/10-vs-12-vs-gauge-367.png
6964026 Man, you are just cruising through this! Glad you're enjoying.
~Guru, one of ze editors who occasionally misses things.
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-Scratches neck spastically-
7436372
It's coming lol, just waiting on my editor to get some free time to go over it. Curse RL for getting in the way of ponies.
Something I never understood in any Fallout stories is this, why in all that is holy is Discord made into some super evil twisted villain in these settings? He is chaos yes but he isn't a damn Warhammer Chaos God/Daemon. Hell I'd figure he would hate the Wasteland because 'oh joy ruins and wastelands...How fun and exciting...-yawn-'
Figured he be less murder happy since death is the end, nothing changing or chaotic about a corpse rotting away.
Villain fine but murder maim kill burn just seems dumb in my mind. Should be more interested in having his kingdom of chaos and utter `wtf` than killing all the things and having the idiot raiders around. Who are rather bleh as they pretty predictable creatures in what they do at that.
Personal thoughts on it is all, still reading this thing if just to find out how it ends.