Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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I like your setting.
The main character's a griffin (it can't get much cooler than that)
And I absolutly adore your drawings. (I never thought a grffin, a fusion of two dangerous predators, to look soooo cute.)
I whish I would be able to draw cute stuff like your griffin...
I'll give you a like, oh, and take that. I found it inside my omelet this morning.
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Glad you like it! If you want to read it on your channel as an audio book, that's perfectly fine with me. That would definitely be a first for me!
I know some of the names are a bit unusual, so if you want a pronunciation guide or something I'd be happy to help.
4204830 heh ^.^' yeah I need a bit of help with pronouncing those names and I'd really appreciate it if you could do that!
This sentence encapsulates everything I enjoy about our protagonist, Kashmir. He is a pragmatist but not one without a sense for moral dissonance. He works for Red Eye but only because he appreciates what the guy does that others never attempt. Even his reason for looking for work is simply to provide for a loved one-- no heroic resolve necessary for that. He has no need for tragedy or greatness to attract compassion; just being a natural product of the world surrounding him endears him to us readers.
These quiet, slow-paced scenes are wonderfully written. An adequate amount of characterization and atmosphere never hurt any story. While the narration around the patrol scene felt a little monotonous, it served its purpose remarkably elsewhere. I look forward to seeing more of this story in the future!
String start and very well done to you, I very much am interested in reading more about the characters you've created for us. This is usually the point where I post some constructive criticism, but as it is I cant find anything. I will read forward with enthusiasm.
In other news someone needs to get that poor Griff a collision detector.
Damn this is the good stuff, half goofy innocent main character with a griffin there are sweet on him. This gonna be good!
Nitpicks:
" What all could they have stuffed inside this thing to make it so heavy?" Delete
" She grabbed my by the shoulders and scrutinized my entire body." me
" Nothing hurt, so that was a good sign." Sounds like he is hurting, so should properly be nothing broken.