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Yay for Xenith!
3040881 Small guns is her only offensive skill. They're the only weapons that she's able to use. Thanks for the Sneak suggestion. I wasn't sure whether I should count it as a tag skill.
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In fact, there's an official Character Sheet for Littlepip, which I am not sharing with you right now due to spoilers. When you've read the whole story, I advise you to take a peek.
XENITH!! Glad to see you girl, now the party is complete.
I just love Little Pip's treatment of Daffidoil, It serves aholes like that right and I love it when they experience extreme pain. It also demonstrates that you don't really need rape for a girl to be motivated or to have character development for the female in question. Another thing that I love was Little Pip's realization at how stupid of a plan this is, not due to the overwhelming odds, but to how alone she felt.
Also, somepony punch stern for me.
Burning hoof!
I love that part. The first time I read it I fell into one of those random giggle fits where I couldn't stop laughing, even though I knew that the joke wasn't all that funny. It was just so unexpected.
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Wait, they're not all up yet? Is Kkat editing them and updated then newly here?
3045863 Chapter or 2 a day so it doesn't overwhelm people I would have to guess. It allows people to actually read and stay caught up instead of seeing the word count and already feeling worn out. She said in her description that is not editing in other than formatting so that it is as close to the original that is posted on EQD.
Great!!
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This story was so good that I decided I couldn't wait, and read all the chapters on Equestria Daily (Over the course of about 5 days, but still.)
This is such a good story. Like, no story has ever done that to me.
Like, Kkat.
I fucking love you.
In a homosexual way
I'll re-read this as you release chapters here.
Also, quick question, why does this never show up in the featured box?
I understand that with its constant updates, it would be there all the time, and for a story that's been out a while, it's could be viewed as unfair. But I knew of this story back before I started reading fanfics, and people said it was amazing, and I just didn't read it until I saw it in the featured box here, and I thought "Eh, what the hell, I'll give it a shot."
Like, maybe it could show up every once in a while for people like me.
I ramble a lot, don't I?
I should start a blog to help me contain my feelings.
Maybe a tumblr.
3048434 How do you know kkat's gender?
'Bout damn time this was on fimfiction!
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Alright, So I'm assuming Kkat is a guy.
I still mean what I say though. c:
EDIT: Reading back on a comment like, 3 before me or something, halo003qd says Kkat is a girl.
Iunno. I still love him/her.
We're getting to the point in the story where the chapters are getting longer and longer and all I want are faster, larger updates!
In other words, this story is great.
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Really, does gender matter when the author has written a magnificent story?
But yeah, it's good to know so that you know how to address and/or talk about a person. So yeah, Kkat's a she, but then again, even if she were male, she'd still have written Fo:E splendidly.
Sounds just like the Pitt DLC for Fallout 3.This story keeps getting better and better!!
Such gloriously evocative language. It's bits like this that have kept me enthralled throughout.
Also, interesting little aside with the Soul Mirror. Looks like Rarity didn't keep her promise after all. And looks like someone -
likelyprobablydefinitely Pinkie - figured it would be perfect as a funhouse attraction.Which, granted, it kinda is. But still...
Interesting to see ponified Richard Moreau in this chapter. And don't think I didn't see the Fallout 3 nod.
Okay, this has really got me going. Littlepip going up against The legendary vault dweller. Maybe not what the author had in mind, and i am not sure because i haven't finished the story, but holy mother of fuck i want to play fallout 3 again.
SPOILERS
Gawd's talent is feather. If you have to ask what this means, you don't deserve to know.
I read this, and I get the strangest feeling that it didn't cause any brooding at all last time . . . but that doesn't make any sense.
I don't even know whether or not I don't even know how I feel. But I know I'm pretty reliable about certain stimuli.
Six months or so ago, I thought I knew myself. That was pretty weird. I'm glad it was only a brief phase.
I like music. Let's go with that as my comment. Because I do rather like music.
You don't give yourself enough credit. Who believed she could take down an entire slaver town? Who wanted to save a pony who tried to rob her after she freed him from being executed in accord with the laws of the community where he had chosen to live? He is fearless and noble and just in a way you could never be, true, but you are fearless and noble and just in a way he could never be.
Another bit I quite liked. It's not every day the hero is the one saying "we're not so different."
It's not every day it's a true statement, either. Most villains are pulling this claim either out of a severe inability to understand the hero, or just directly our of their plots.
I recommend using whatever fits the zebra rifle. Zebra rifles are good for making points.
But are you so surprised? Have you forgotten that her loyalty is to the Ministry that tried to kill AJ when she became inconvenient?
Something about this reminds me of . . . what was it called? Harmony, that's it. A crossover with Bioshock. A story which would be better if it didn't come off as trying to be the next Fallout: Equestria, an ambition which it does not achieve. I feel like there's irony in here, somewhere. If only I weren't being distracted by wanting to know why that came to mind, and being distracted from that by this, I might figure one of them out.
Eh, there are worse thing than a homogenized gestalt. There are also better things, of course, but I'm not really sure you can justify calling it worse than murder.
I believe my first time through, I got distracted for a bit by involuntary empathy. But apparently, I've gotten better at ignoring all this imaginary pain in the last year. Certainly a useful skill to have.
Symbolism!
Yeah, funny thing about Image. Somehow, Rarity managed to run a Ministry that was the opposite of her constant need for attention.
The desire for approval from authority figures is pretty deeply ingrained. It's one of the keys to living in groups, though admittedly slightly less so since the advent of various more frontal-lobe focused systems of promoting unity.
Stern doesn't have the same sort of charisma as Red Eye, but she does run a tight ship, as a rule. I don't like the way she runs Fillydelphia, but I do respect it.
See, this is the sort of thing I fear. Red Eye's methods aren't pleasant, but he's doing a much better job of saving the Wasteland than most ponies these days. I'd rather have Littlepip, but Red Eye is still better than another few centuries of anarchy. It's really no contest at all.
And so this would be the worst outcome. The others just don't have your drive and planning acumen. They can't be enough without you.
Does it matter? Red Eye didn't get where he was today by blindly following anything, whether or not it's a voice in his head.
A very familiar town.
It's good to remember that even raiders, crazy as they may often be, and despite the strong antisocial behaviors that are necessary to earn the title, do not live alone. Even those most broken by the Wasteland still know friendship.
Mares screaming: it's like catnip to heroes. They can't resist chasing after it.
It's also similar in being a mind-affecting drug.
A mirror that shows who you truly are never promised to communicate clearly.
When times are tough, caring is painful. Shrinking our social circles makes it hurt less.
Progress requires sacrifice, sometimes.
Welcome to Pinkie. One could get lost in such a memory orb, and forget how to believe in anything that doesn't feel this real. And what else ever could?
The wise do not question Pinkie. There are some thing mortal equine was never meant to know.
And now you know. You'll melt your brain just thinking about her, if you're not careful.
You've prove yourself clever and resourceful on many occasions, some of which the Goddess knows of directly, and one of which was in the past hour. Do you really think this is overkill?
So seldom is it true.
There is one fundamental difference, though, that Red Eye fails to grasp. He does it for Equestria and himself; she dos it for herself and Equestria. And that makes a big difference.
. . . I suppose you want a translation? Fine. Red Eye sees a world that is sick, and thinks himself a good choice to treat it. His duty is to the new Equestria he strives to build, with him as the leader of course. Littlepip sees a world that is wrong, and cannot bear to stand idly by. Her duty is to her conscience, which demands she help in the present. And so Red Eye fights the disease with no regard for the symptoms he causes, while Littlepip attacks the symptoms with little thought of a deeper cure.
That's Twilight for you. Letters, letters, letters, all day and night.
The smash hit that's sweeping the fandom! Fallout: Equestria On Ice! Buy your tickets while supplies last!
If that existed, I don't think I could not see it. I would have to know how. And why. My confusion would not rest easily.
She going to try to kill you, and you know what that means: new friend!
Take that 4th wall!!
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Pfff, not even. Like, Spacetime future knowledge.
101, eh?
A very nice touch.
So Pinkie Sense can work through the Time/Space Continum-inum-um-num, now? Only one word can describe what I'm thinking.
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"And so Red Eye fights the disease with no regard for the symptoms he causes, while Littlepip attacks the symptoms with little thought of a deeper cure."
(Augh how the hell i turn this in a comment)
(Please read this with Floutershy voice, i realy would hate to star an argument or ssound rude. please?)
Yep that is the diference, but you also forgot to add that while Litllepip learns from the past, Red eyes instead shuns the past.
Red Eyes is forcing an evolution that will come naturally. Litllepip is cleaning the world, making it better. Littlepip way dosen't need to search for a better cure because if more ponies were like her, there would be no need for a Red Eyes.
Littlepip is the Hero the wastelands Wants, Needs And deserves. Their lives are way to hard too deserve someone like Red Eyes, any solution that involves Slaves and blood sports isn't a solution
It seems an "easy" way out if you ask me.
I mean until now he havent actualy physically worked. He dosen't know how the slaves "feel".
Also, he works with the Alcorns, he is giving them ponies to turn into more Alicorns, that isn't a good way to rebuild Equestria.
I kinda have the feeling that Red eyes never found his Virtue, and lost himself to the wastelands. He is a broken Lilltepip.
In short i don't like him or his methods. These recent chapters (this one and the the one before) make me fell horrible and wanting to watch Lilttepip crubstomp some bad guys for some hours.
(Huh, maybe i should anylize Litllepip a bit more, maybe we have more in common then iust the moral outrage)
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Man this was the longest post i ever did here
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Also, Kkat i love your writing style.
So, there's several correlations I've noticed.
I'm beginning to think Red-Eye is The Master from the original Fallout, and that the Alicorns are ooze-dipped ponies, as were the Supermutants.
The Master, aka Richard Moreau was originally born in a vault/stable [and later escaped], as did Red-Eye [and later Richard found himself in a vat of mutative gunk so it's not out of the question that Red-Eye could have met the same fate]. The Masters' vault (I believe) was centered around military technology applications, which could explain why Red-Eye has cybernetic implants. But there's something else. If Red-Eye IS The Master, wouldn't he just be an amorphous-mutated blob? What if The Master/Red-Eye simply had another pony implanted with cybernetic technology and used him as a puppet effectively? That would entirely remove all suspicion off the REAL Red-Eye leaving him free to plot more devious schemes. Both The Master and Red-Eye had spoken of The Unity, and used deceptive methods to have other people/ponies to do his bidding.
I'm thinking that Red-Eye is the ponified version of The Master, except using a mechanised pony-puppet; the alicorns are mutated ponies whom share a collective, hive-mind-like intelligence so Red-Eye is able to see and hear what they're doing etc.
But I've yet to read on and find out what's going on. I may or may not be right on SOME level.
That... was the funniest and weirdest breaking of the fourth-wall and the time-space continuum Pinkie Pie ever, ever, ever, ever (which is FOREVER) did. Ever.
I remember hearing Celestia mention that from the parasprite episode.
I wear my watch on my right arm, and I think that connects with the fact that I'm left-handed, which is the dominant hand of many people, but not as many as there are right-handed people. Does this mean that if Littlepip were to hold things in her hooves, she would be left-hoofed?
I officially have more respect for Pinkie Pie.
I wish they had met Xenith sooner so we would have had more chapters with her, but her tragic story is perfect for Fillydelphia. I adore that character. Out of all of them, she is the one I hope most fervently will have a quiet retirement of relative peace. LittlePip ogling her flank is priceless, too.
So Raritys sould mirror was the funhouse attaction...
“Burning hoof means Littlepip’s watching me,” Pinkie Pie blurted out impossibly. “Or will be watching me. I’m not sure yet.” She bounced after her friends. “Who’s Littlepip?”
ok.....how is it even remotely possible that pinkie pie even know pips name
I wonder how many "grow your horn" ads could be there after all those years...
Thumbs up, Littlepip...
Yeah, right...
Shit...
Also, seems that Pinkie Sense predicts even very distant future...
Pinkie Pie. Somehow knows Littlepips name and when she watching her... My faith in witch craft is restored!
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DONT QUESTION IT
Not sure any pony else has noticed this, but "oatmeal, are you crazy?!" Is one of my favorite pinkie pie quotes! I love how this was added in, in the same chapter where Pinkie indicates LittlePip is watching her. This is extreme classic fashion! I love this very much!
Thank you for putting the oatmeal quote slyly in there! Truthfully genius!
A roof and a straw mat. Honestly that's five-star accomidations compared to some of the slave pits I've read about. Roofs are awesome, period. The mat on a hard floor is way better than mud. Plus you get the entire mat instead of having to compete for floor space from overcrowding. Location is important when picking a place to bed down for the night, regardless of social status. Such as not next to the designated piss bucket. Sure the smell is bad, but it gets far worse when a sleepy pony can't see where he's going in the middle of the night and knocks it over, soaking you and your wonderful straw mat in filth.
Living conditions aside, the working conditions are definitely the worst I've seen.
On an entirely different note, the creatures in this story are far more nightmarish than most any other story I've experienced, Fallout or otherwise.
I laughed at this, remembering exactly the guy that this is referencing.
So much fun re-reading this now that I've played the Fallout games. Most of the games anyway. Wonder if I'm missing any Fallout: Tactics references?
I could only think of this reading this. "Refuse, try and run, disobey me, that collar on your neck'll go off and take your head with it!"
Maybe if she was really kinky? (Too much?)
Red Eye, you ironic bastard.
So, this is where Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons was born.
Fuck, why did I laugh?
Fuck, why did I laugh?
If this connected Old World Blues into this story, I would have completely forgiven Red Eyes for allowing that awesome into this cocktail of Pony misery. Alas, OWB came out about 2 years after this chapter was written...
You mean the right way? The nodes are on the left of the PipBuck/PipBoy, every time you wanted to turn one, you would have to cover the screen with your hoof/hand. Less problem for an unicorn, but for everyone else, that's bad engineering.
Not fair! No stealing moves!
She knows too much.
Kkat! That number is sacred! Like 13!
3092394 I have introduced a lot of language from this story into my vocabulary. I now know about 20 more words to describe destruction of objects. Woo.
Red Eye’s voice sounded proud through the tinny speakers
The Shadowbolts, lead by Rainbow Dash
1. Tiny.
2. Led.
So I guess this is it, the possible do or die moment where LilPip will finally discover her virtue. If the encounter with the soul mirror from earlier wasn't a sign then the encounter with the zebra should be. Will her prejudice against those who detonated the bombs get the better of her? I don't know because of the mere fact that I haven't read the next few chapters so it's fun to keep guessing
Desperate times can change ponies but knowing how much you've truly changed compared to the obvious 'Oh, I killed again, no big deal' is quite a big difference. Again, the core beliefs or rather the core values of who you are might not be so easily changed but given time, everything will. At the very least a few chapters back she was still able to up chuck from the blowy-upness from... I think it was the alicorns chasing them back at the tower? Can't remember no more.
Another fact that her core didn't truly change was the fact that she refused to kill the kids. Again as per my previous comment on beliefs and upbringings, learning such things early on shape your world and ultimately your personality. LilPip may have hope yet and even if there are still later chapters, those who haven't read (including me) won't truly know how much she will change. This also shows that the soul mirror doesn't show their current inner self, just a possible future.
Fight on Littlepip, fight for those who believe in you and for Spike who waits for a better Equestria
4408925 I hate it when people try to "correct" errors that aren't there. Tinny is an adjective of the quality of the sound from said speakers. Google it, and stop being so hypercritical, please.
When did that happen? I don't remember a giant flaming Pinkie.
I've been meaning to ask: Is Red Eye gay? We know nothing of his personal life, but Littlepip and Autumn Leaf both swung that way, maybe all of his Unity are. Ha, that would be funny, especially if they were going to make the stallion alicorns Red Eye promised.
All I could picture while reading about The Pit is the arena in Oblivion.
Littlepip gives the best mental images...
I guess it'd be easier to find a hammer...
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And now I read Red Eye's broadcasts in Roger Waters' voice.
Let me guess, a surgeon?
Security, you say?
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Yeah, it may be a problem...
Jokes aside, there are definitely things Project:Horizon is lacking in comparison to the original FoE. I didn't make it past the first book of PH, and I was already tired of its darkness and general atmosphere of hopelessness. At some point I caught myself muttering "Geez, Somber, let that poor Blackjack do something that won't bite her in the ass two paragraphs later..."
Your chance to start a career in show-business...
In another universe, she'd be a good ophtalmologist...
Well, not only face...
Better not. Who knows how much spam is there now... And seems it's the second time I comment on that...
Silly Littlepip. There's always time to take a look...
Yeah, it usually makes putting clothes on quite hard...
And then Imperial March played in my head...
While listening to it, Celestia only smirked...
Time for a P.E. lesson...
only pinkie pie can tell when something is happening even though she is dead when the pony is doing it
WAT?
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When I read those numbers, it clicked for me. Red Eye and LittlePip are two paths from the same start. LittlePip is good karma and Red Eye is bad They both have the same origin, and faced the same choices, they just chose differently.
And I said oat meal are you crazy ?!
HOLY. SH
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*Insert Assassin's Creed 2 Reference*