• Published 15th Mar 2022
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Journey to the First Flame (Continued) - Rated Ponystar



The contiuation of Darth Link 22's story where Fluttershy helps Smolder fufill an ancient dragon tradition

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The End

Fluttershy had to admit when dragons wanted to party they could really party. Combine it with Pinkie Pie’s usual celebration tastes and it was a bonanza of a good time. While there were some tensions between the Chromatics and the Metallics sharing the same area, that was all broken up the moment Pinkie Pie started a dancing session. Rainbow Dash and Applejack joined followed by Smolder who dragged Jaden into the circle and danced with him. Skyler dragged her friends and pretty soon everyone was dancing.

That and laughing at Twilight’s dancing. Even Fluttershy couldn’t help but still giggle whenever she saw her friend attempt to get down and “boogie”. In the end, it was a sign that the two dragons could not only get along, but also with ponies as well. Smolder was hailed as a hero among both dragons races as Ember proudly proclaimed her to be an example of what dragons should be. The Metallics, in turn, honored her for helping them stop Valaxis.

Whatever political doubts about Ember’s choice to change dragon society and ally with ponies were now all but an afterthought. Since dragons respected strength above all else, it was going to be hard to argue against being friends with a race that can seal away a Typhon. The Metallics stayed for another day for Ember to discuss some possible negotiations and a healing of old wounds. It wasn’t going to all get fixed in a day, but it was a start.

After that? It was time to go home. It was hard to believe that everything that happened was now over and Fluttershy was heading back to her cottage where her animal friends resided. But having been through so many adventures she knew that it would be just another memorable moment to put in her diary. She was looking forward to the peace that was going to come with it. At least until the next big crisis. Or some Friendship problem that would take thirty minutes or so to fix. It varied.

“Are you sure you’re okay?” Fluttershy asked Smolder who was walking with her to her cottage.

“Yeah, I’m alright,” Smolder said as she rubbed her arm. “Okay, fine. I miss Jaden a bit.”

“I thought you both agreed to continue talking through mail?” Fluttershy asked.

“Yeah and he has said he’s interested in coming to the school next year,” Smolder replied but sighed. “But...I kinda...feel weird.”

“It’s your first crush,” Flutttershy giggled as she put a comforting hoof on the dragon’s shoulder. “You’re going to feel a lot of things. But I’m sure you and Jaden will be able to continue with what you have.”

“Thanks,” Smolder said with a light blush on her cheeks before pointing to Fluttershy. “Just make sure nobody knows about this. I got a reputation to keep.”

“I promise,” Fluttershy said as she giggled. “But I think everyone’s going to notice that you changed a lot from this journey.”

“Really?” Smolder asked in surprise.

“Yes, I think you’ve grown up a lot,” Fluttershy said as she hugged Smolder. “And I’m proud of you.”

Smolder hesitated at first, but soon she hugged Fluttershy back. Only for a minute before pushing her away. “Okay, mushy time is over. Let’s go see my friends.”

The two soon arrived at the door to Fluttershy’s cottage where Sandbar opened the door and the two blinked upon seeing him and the others in their current state. Their fur and feathers looked like they had been through a tornado, their bloodshot eyes were twitching, and they had multiple bruises and welts on their bodies. Sandbar all but gasped in relief like he had just been freed from imprisonment. Gallus was leaning on Silverstream to support himself while Cozy Glow was practically sprawled all over the ground. “Oh thank Celestia you are back.”

“Uh, yeah,” Smolder said as she looked at her friends. “You guys okay.”

“Just...peachy...” Ocellus sighed as she rubbed her neck and winced. “So...we’re free?”

“Um, yes. Is Angel here?” Fluttershy asked as a familiar bunny hopped over and dived into her embrace. “Angel! Mama missed you so much! Did you have a fun time with the others?”

Angel smiled at his “caretakers” who all backed away with a gulp before he turned to his owner and nodded.

“That’s a good boy,” Fluttershy said as she snuggled his face.

“...yeah....good...boy...” Gallus grumbled.

“Well, since you kids did such a good job, would you like to babysit him next week when-”

Smolder and Fluttershy soon found themselves knocked on their rears as the group screamed in horror and ran so fast that they could give Rainbow Dash a run for their money. The two watched as they soon became a dust cloud in the distance as they looked at each other wondering what that was about. All while Angel Bunny chuckled and smiled in satisfaction.

The End

Dedicated In Memory My Friend, and Original Writer of this story,

DarkLink22

Rest In Peace

Author's Note:

And it's finally over. After so long writing this, the journey is over. Once again, this was written in memory of the original writer and my friend DarkLink22 who passed away in 2022. I wished it didn't take this long to write it but I managed to complete it at last.

I want to thank you all for reading this. And I want to thank TheAncientPolitzanian for editing most of the chapters.

Comments ( 7 )

Smolder and Fluttershy soon found themselves knocked on their rears as the group screamed in horror and ran so fast that they could give Rainbow Dash a run for their money. The two watched as they soon became a dust cloud in the distance as they looked at each other wondering what that was about. All while Angel Bunny chuckled and smiled in satisfaction.

Crazy bunny 🐰

Dedicated In Memory My Friend, and Original Writer of this story,

I'm sure he will be happy that you did this for him may he rest in peace

And all is well that ends well! Or, in the case of Angel Bunny...well enough. :rainbowlaugh:

Okay this was a pretty awesome story and it was nice of you to finish for your friend after he passed away which I'm very sorry for your loss may he rest in peace so it looks like Fluttershy is just looking back at how the two dragon tribes are getting along and of course getting along with the ponies as well which that's a good sign of peace and it looks like everybody is heading back home and smolder is pretty excited to see Jaden to come the school friendship and speaking of it when they reached to her house the kids see better days and of course they had to take care of that crazy bunny I do like the ending that was pretty funny and again the only thing I'm kind of disappointed that smolder's friends didn't come to help smolder in the end it was kind of a huge Miss opportunity for them to see how she's been doing and not only that meeting with the other dragons but other than that this was a pretty good story and a very good way to dedicate your friend story that he couldn't finish under the circumstances keep up the good work

Great job with this. You honored DarthLink22 by finishing his work.

“...yeah.... good... boy...” Gallus grumbled.

He's the fluffy-tailed devil!!!

I want to hear OORAHHS for this man, I may be new to this site but this was made for Darth.

Lets continue our stories and lives, for DarthLink22 and all those who can't be here today.

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