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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Monday
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 1 week
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 3 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 4 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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Mar
5th
2022

Early March Story Update · 9:09pm Mar 5th, 2022

Sorry for the dearth of info lately, but I’ve been busy with some not entirely pleasant stuff, whose nature I will not divulge. But here’s where my stories stand right now. I’m tagging this Midnight Rising only because it’s first in line for release; I really wish they’d allow us to tag more than one story in blog posts at once.

Midnight Rising:

First order of business: the new Midnight Rising chapter is not ready yet as I’ve only been able to work on it in bits and pieces over the past week. It’s currently at 5600 words and I will try to have it draft complete by tomorrow, but that means it probably won’t go out until Tuesday or Wednesday. It will take that long to get prereads in and make multiple editing passes.

As for highlights, another new race is going to be (briefly) introduced, while another far more familiar one will make its first appearance at the end of the chapter. Aside from our favorite High Priestess domming Sour Sweet and addicting her to dick as well as showing just why she adores black holes, the chapter includes a catchup with our three favorite school heads as well our favorite failed couple from the show (Big Mac and Cheerilee), and the first appearance of futa in the story.

Feathered Hearts

I’m not currently working on this, but I was compelled to go into both Eros and Continuation and Chronicles recently in order to do a pair of retcons. The first is I went chapter-by-chapter to fix all instances of Gilda’s eyes being referred to as blue. They’re now gold, as they should be. I’m truly sorry; I’m still not sure how I got it in my head that they were blue when there are countless examples otherwise online. :facehoof:

The second is that I went back into Chapter 6 (the Hall of Heroes chapter) and drastically toned down the political overtones there after I received another complaint in the comments. After I listened to the offending areas recited, I decided that they were indeed much too jarring and needed to be pared way back. So they should be a lot less obtrusive now. They’re not entirely gone, but what’s left is what I feel are perfectly reasonable observations by our human friends of the difference between their culture and the griffon one. Sorry, but sometimes I have to come back to something a lot later before I see what’s wrong with it. That’s what happens when you get a bit too wedded to your writing. :ajsleepy:

Firefly

The next chapter of Into the Storm is half-done. It will consist of only two medium-sized sections this time and probably max out at around 9k words, opening with a Captain’s Mast that determines the fate of Fell Flight and Firefly after their duel over Thunderbolt and Gavian. The second section will be seeing the Maresk campaign from the Gryphon side, as described by our favorite former Red Talon Ambassador. Estimated draft completion is mid to late week, with an eye on a weekend release. Look for a possible teaser later. This will be #2 of the promised six Firefly chapters to be released by summer.

Harmonic Resonance

This will be my next clop chapter after the new Midnight Rising entry is completed, featuring what’s likely going to be the hardest chapter of the story I will write: it’s time for our favorite party girl to ascend.


That’s your weekend update. Time to go shopping now. In honor of Sour Sweet’s second Midnight Rising chapter, I want to make this Sweet & Sour pork recipe tonight.

Comments ( 1 )

Wanted to share this, in relation to Firefly:

Be sure to check out the research that went into it. Pretty interesting.

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