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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Tuesday
    New Midnight Rising chapter off to prereaders...

    At long last. This is the redo of the chapter I was forced to scrap in April and then about 80% rewrite. I saved a few select bits and pieces from the original version, but the rest went by the wayside.

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  • Friday
    Still pecking away on Midnight Rising and Feathered Hearts...

    The two Lemon Zest chapters of Midnight Rising have now reached 26,600 words and they’re still nowhere near done, with probably another 5-6k words to go. Gotta treat the girl right, after all, and also make sure there’s plenty of sexy side dishes around her. And as for Feathered Hearts?

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  • 1 week
    Still working on Midnight Rising...

    At the rate of about 800-1000 words a day. That’s my key to getting stuff done that’s causing you issues; just be sure you put at least a little time in on it this day to have some forward momentum. The two chapters are now up to 24,100 words. I’ll work on it more this weekend, at least around continuing work around the maps and battle graphics I’m making for Feathered Hearts.

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  • 2 weeks
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 2 weeks
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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Feb
22nd
2022

Firefly Chapter in prereads, battle graphics still being created · 2:46pm Feb 22nd, 2022

I’m about half done with the latter, with four images generated and several more remaining as I need them to show the progression of battle and ensure my narration makes sense. Current plan is to release the chapter, titled The Daisy Regiment, tomorrow night. Feedback so far from AJA and others has been quite good, so here’s the promised teaser, with one of the finished graphics at the end:


Five minutes later, a single century-strong company of Corps soldiers had arrived on top of the hill, landing in the plaza where they saw the green flares fired from unicorn horns still glowing. Methinks the greetings they received from my surviving soldiers were not as saviors but annoyance and ire over having not arrived sooner and leaving the Equestrian Army to fight the Gryphon Empire alone. ‘Twas certain that we had seen nary a single pegasus over the battlefield during the night, despite promises that the other Corps divisions were being quickly shifted to face the gryphons.

Though I had no doubt that was true, ‘twas still ridiculous to me and many other ponies that we had to wait so long for them to appear in significant numbers instead of token ones; methinks their commander was correct that a single company could not affect the outcome of the overall battle.

A commander that arrived before me with an angry but uncertain air. “Sergeant First Class Redtail Raptor at your service, Colonel,” she saluted me with a blade-equipped wing as pegasus were sometimes wont to do. “And please know this action may cost me my career.”

I was unimpressed as I returned the honor. “And please know that your career is not at issue here, Sergeant First Class, and neither are your lives!” I motioned to the still-strewn gryphon and pony corpses around us from the earlier battle, their sight causing many of the younger pegasi soldiers to look afraid or nauseated. ‘Twas little surprise to me that they reacted so badly; the Aerial Corps 1st Division defended the central part of Equestria where there were no borders with hostile neighbors—save perchance the thestrals if they ever decided to rebel—and saw no action as a rule.

“What is at issue is extracting as many soldiers as possible from the Imperial encirclement of Maresk! And do that, you and your soldiers must protect them as they make their dash to safety behind my battle lines and beneath the cover of my archers on Harness Hill!”

“So you said,” she agreed shortly as the first rays of the sun illuminated the top of the hill, partially blocking my vision of the battle still raging to the east. “But we cannot by ourselves hold off any more than mayhap a century or two of gryphon soldiers. And methinks there are far more Talons than that in the air!”

“And you do not have to.” I stabbed at the map before me with a hoof. “Your task is to launch slashing, hit-and-fly attacks on their airborne forces as they attempt to hem escaping units! Force them to face you but do not linger long! Knock down a few enemy soldiers and if possible make them chase you! Do not get pinned down; your only objective is to give fleeing units the opportunity to reach the safety of our lines. Make for Harness Hill if you pick up too much pursuit, and my soldiers will protect you.”

“I see. And their earth gryphons?” she prompted. “‘Tis certain we are not well-equipped to fight them when they are grounded. What if they throw up a battle line in front of a retreating force?”

“Then they must be broken through by that force. Feel free to strike targets of opportunity if they’re looking the wrong way—Talon armor is weak at the flanks and the back of their neck, including the wingbase. But do not linger or become heavily engaged. We need to keep your unit as intact as possible.”

“‘Tis nice to know you care about our lives,” she said dryly, to which I raised an eyeridge, the glare to the east becoming blinding as the sun was now rapidly rising into the sky.

“I care less for your lives than extracting as many soldiers from the encirclement as possible. But I cannot do that if you are ground down too quickly.”

“Now that is far more the attitude I would expect from the Equestrian Army,” she said with a smirk as her underlings looked decidedly uncomfortable at the direction the conversation had gone. “Orders understood. We will do what we can. But given you hold the sole remaining escape route from Maresk and are a refuge for fleeing forces and civilians alike, methinks I am surprised they have not struck you a second time yet.”

This time, ‘twas my turn to give an unpleasant smirk. “Fear not, Sergeant First Class. ‘Tis no doubt such a strike is coming, and when it does—”

A series of lightning bolts crashed into the east-facing slopes of the hill followed by a large formation of Talons streaking in at low altitude out of the rising sun.


Chapter is currently coming in at around 10.5k words; editing passes will probably bring it up over 11k. As far as future writing goes, after this is I’ll work on a new Midnight Rising chapter, then Harmonic Resonance, and then Firefly again. You can probably expect that story rotation for the next few months with the occasional Feathered Heart chapter thrown in when the mood strikes me.

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