Reading Reaction #1 part 3 · 8:17am Jan 27th, 2022
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 6:
I didn’t like being alone with Rarity in the bathroom. I preferred open spaces that would allow me to escape if I felt the need for it. Worst of all, she seemed to be getting ready for one of her tedious monologues.
Sister’s am I right? Can’t live with em? Can’t stuff em back in the old baby-maker?
“Their bigotry is so potent that they would speak in this tone even about Twilight Sparkle. The ignorance! She’s no true Canterlotian. Have you seen how carelessly she eats? I’d dare to say that even some animals have better table manners than she does. Her behavior lacks pride and sophistication. The sort I possess in ample amount!” She struck a power-pose, standing on her hind legs, lifting a foreleg in the air, and pointing to her chest with the other. Her eyes lingered on the empty ceiling.
Wow Rarity can you be anymore stuck up?
My hooves were sunk in the water. The burning heat slowly crept up my legs. “Help?”
Rarity stop being so iffy and pay attention to you’re younger sister!!
“They never proved that she had anything to do with the disappearance of the ponies from her office, but rumors spread on their own. They talked about her as if she had used ponies in her fringe experiments. To this day, they couldn’t come up with any conclusive evidence to back up their unfounded claims.
What the heck is this backstory???
There was no destination before me. I just tried to outrun the hurt but was unsuccessful at that. Dark clouds slowly gathered, and not just on my mind but all over the sky. I looked up to see if it was Rainbow Dash expressing her jealousy, but she wasn’t the one pushing the clouds. They were moving in on their own.
By Celestia I hate Rarity in this story!!!
CHAPTER 7:
I heard the clopping of my hooves on the pavement, but I didn’t feel the connection. Even the engraved rocks rejected me. The street slid under me all by itself.
Ooh girl! I have been in that state before.
I jerked forward. The sudden move came about a little because I was anxious to hear the cutie mark gaining story but mostly because Twilight tapped me on the rump with a wing. My legs had always reacted on their own whenever something violated me from behind.
I know the story isn’t going to go their. Probably? But this paragraph mad me uncomfortable and the fact Bad Dragon used the word violated and Twilight wing touch her rump makes me think of Pedo’s. Again I doubt it’s going their especially with it being below an M and Twilight being the character doing the “touching”
“I’m not certain, actually. The consensus is that the original body is not sustained in teleportation. However, I suspect that there might be an empty sub-dimension somewhere, packed with Twilight’s who attempted teleportation, cannibalizing on each other to sustain themselves.”
The f*ck!!!
“No!” she raised her voice. “We shouldn’t even be talking about the manipulation of one's age in such a manner. It’s taboo magic, almost as detestable as necromancy. It’s against the natural order. All ponies age, until their time comes to leave this world.”
Against the natural order and almost as bad as Necromancy you say? Well I know a Zebra from the prologue who might be able to help you with forbidden magic.
CHAPTER 8:
I was eager to go to her basement. It would give me a chance to dry up without catching a cold. Out in the open, every little breeze felt like a spray of cold water.
I’m feeling even colder just reading this!
“I take offense at the use of that adjective!” Yelled Twilight without looking back.
lol
“And how can her mane prehensility even work? I’ll get to the bottom of her, even if it kills her. Well, the latter, obviously, won’t happen. Surely, I’ll get my answer even before the autopsy. You see, with my latest tinkering on my puppy, I can now measure even the tiniest variations of bio-magic discharges. With all that extra juicy data I’m bound to figure it out!”
This is like a crazy psycho version of the main 6 then….
….unless non of this is happening and Sweetie is unconscious due to the horn injury or some kind of zebra mumbo jumbo in the woods. Or maybe the zebra or the Spirit are trying to affect/possess her but Sweetie is resisting so they are breaking her spirit.
Or this is just a darker version of the main 6 from the show!
“Whaa...”
lol that was a great but strange ending to a chapter.
Reading reaction to a reading reaction:
Indeed. Sisters, can't live with em.
Well, she's the element of stuck-up. Wait, it's generosity? Could have fooled me...
In her mind, she is helping her. Then again, Hitler also tried to help the world, and look where that got us...
It's actually quite essential. It also explains why a stuck-up like Rarity didn't live in Canterlot.
Before the end, you'll hate them all. There are no good guys in my stories, just the bad guys.
It might be the default state and everything nice in our lives is just a happy accident.
People call me Bad Dragon for a reason.
The truth is sometimes uncomfortable.
Hopefully not. There's been enough of that in Zebrabwe.
Well, you know what they say, science is cold.
Well, for one, Sweetie Belle isn't the most reliable of narrators. Another thing is, everypony has a hidden side. A darker side. Pretending that it isn't there won't make it go away. This is an important lesson that could benefit Sweetie Belle tremendously. Too bad she didn't learn it. But you can.
Well, it's just Sweetie Belle's default thought. Any other thought is just a happy accident.
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Drama
- Slice of Life
In her darkest hour, Sweetie Belle finds salvation, but it comes with a terrible curse.Interesting