I really should have put the damn thing on hiatus, I haven't had any time to work on the stupid thing until now. but yeah as the title of the post reads I'm completely redoing the first chapter to add a bit more context as to what the hell is going on. I am really sorry, honest to God.
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No problem, just make sure this doesn’t become a habit, otherwise readers can get confused about the story.
5569536
Oh of course. Worse case scenario I scrap the story entirely and put the ideas to the side for future use.
It's been a while so I dont remember what was happening 😅
5570169
i dont blame you honestly.
5578340
Was this the story where she was escaping via train to the crystal empire?
5578365
Used to be, yeah. Felt like that story was moving way to quickly though and some aspects I wanted to cover couldn't be realistically achieved. Not only that but I couldn't feel a good connection with Celeste which was a bit of a red flag for me at the start. I want to make sure my characters form some kind of connection for both the writer, and the reader. So I threw agent down out the window and started with Requisite Hope.
5578366
Yeah... I did feel like there was some stuff missing and the pacing was a little fast
5578367
Exactly.