Update: And Hell Followed Chapter 17 "Heart to Heart" · 11:06pm Jun 2nd, 2021
Okay, so I finished revising the chapter I put out today. I added about one thousand words total to it, so I would suggest reading it again if you already have. I didn't tear down Cheerilee's section completely, but I heavily revised her and AJ's conversation and added bits and pieces to her and Elytra.
I'm really sorry for the version I published this morning. I knew it was wrong and off and I still went through with it when I shouldn't have. I'll do better in the future, the narrative and characters deserve better.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
Its totally fine. It's a miracle you can shove out chapters this fast as it is
It wasn't bad, dude. It was just a little head-tilting in one or two places.