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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Tuesday
    New Midnight Rising chapter off to prereaders...

    At long last. This is the redo of the chapter I was forced to scrap in April and then about 80% rewrite. I saved a few select bits and pieces from the original version, but the rest went by the wayside.

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  • 1 week
    Still pecking away on Midnight Rising and Feathered Hearts...

    The two Lemon Zest chapters of Midnight Rising have now reached 26,600 words and they’re still nowhere near done, with probably another 5-6k words to go. Gotta treat the girl right, after all, and also make sure there’s plenty of sexy side dishes around her. And as for Feathered Hearts?

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  • 2 weeks
    Still working on Midnight Rising...

    At the rate of about 800-1000 words a day. That’s my key to getting stuff done that’s causing you issues; just be sure you put at least a little time in on it this day to have some forward momentum. The two chapters are now up to 24,100 words. I’ll work on it more this weekend, at least around continuing work around the maps and battle graphics I’m making for Feathered Hearts.

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  • 2 weeks
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 3 weeks
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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Jan
23rd
2021

Firefly and Feathered Heart Progress Report · 4:44pm Jan 23rd, 2021

The new Firefly chapter is coming along nicely at this point, with 5700 words down and my writing proceeding fluidly--which believe me, does not always happen. It's always nice when it does, though. The working title is Redemption and Retreat, and will open with a section written from the point of view of a pony not heard from yet in this story--Blindside. Depending on how quickly I get it done, including making musical selections and some additional graphics in addition to receiving the usual prereads, we will be aiming for a release sometime later next week.

As for Feathered Heart, I have completed edits on the first two chapters with a third in progress--if you're wondering how extensive my changes are, the second chapter had over 2500 words added to it. I'm still trying to get permission from the mods to get them posted to a new story, but so far the answer is no, unless it's a full rewrite. :ajsleepy: Which I could do, but would be much more time-consuming and result in major delays of the continuation. Even just editing the story, it's likely to be some months before I get there.

DEL's early writing has some issues. Which is hardly unique to him; I look at stuff I wrote from that time frame and wince at everything I did wrong. He got better as he went along, as did I, but I'm basically giving the story a similar treatment to what I did Turnabout Storm so many years ago--full and complete revamp, including story expansion. But even with changes, I emphasize again that I'll be writing this so that the continuation will work with either the original or edited version of the story.

More updates and possible teasers as more work gets done. Before signing off, I'd also like to publicly recognize the newest member of my prereading team, Silverblade5. Welcome aboard, and thank you for taking up the role.

Comments ( 4 )

take as long as you need, it's best you finish it when it's ready on your terms so don't worry

Wooowee. That is a real task you are taking on. Rewriting, let alone picking up an abandoned story and doing so is a brutal task. More stories perish in rewrites than anything else from what I have seen over the years.

Welcome aboard Silverblade! Good to have another pair of eyes on the new writing.

Glad to be here! Thank you for having me along! :rainbowdetermined2:

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