Rewriting Requiem Of Equestria · 6:27pm Nov 29th, 2012
Okay so I tried submitting the story to EQD, and apparently my syntax is all wrong, and he simply didn't like the comical situations considering the post-apocalyptic scenery. Yes I'll say it was a bit of a strict judgement, which I guess is expected from EQD, but at the same time, he was right. It just isn't working. Some of the things he explained about my errors were something I've never really even heard of as a syntax error in writing. Other things, such as repetitive or awkward use of words, made sense. Hopefully I can learn from these punctuation mistakes and succeed in trying again.
When I rewrite it, there may be changes to the story.