Our Day in Disdain update #5

EOur Day in Disdain

• MLP: FiM
• Horror
• Slice of Life
• Tragedy

Rainbow Dash is forced to confront the ghosts of her past and the life she left behind. Lest the one she built for herself crumbles in her hooves.

• Rainbow Dash
• OC
• Main 6

Rainb0w Dashie · 30k words  ·  43  7 · 1.4k views

Chapter five is up!

Chapter Five: Little Posessions

This chapter I was dreading having to do an extensive rewrite one, but fortuitously the part I had to rewrite was able to be removed entirely, so I only had to change a few things.

The part I had to remove is still important to the story, and is going to be included somewhere in part 2, but having it in part 1 disrupted the flow too much so I was able to cut it out and toss the chapter up. Similarly I'm not too sold on the chapter name, just like with the last chapter. But I don't want to spend too much time revising part 1 because I've been doing that for the last 10 years.

I want to get the last two chapters revised, finished the chapter artworks, and finally start writing part 2.

See y'all in the next update!