Changes · 9:50pm Nov 28th, 2012
Sorry for not updating in a while, I've been really bogged down with work and I don't seem to have much free time recently. I've recently been contacted by a fellow by the pseudonym of 'Wasteland Wanderer' who is going to help me fix up the general writing of Oldnew Luna, not really grammatical stuff like Ultra has been doing, but to do with the whole romance thing which I suck at. Before this happens though, we thought it best to ask you, my followers and the people who have favourited my story, do you mind if this goes ahead? I personally think it would be great to have one of the main themes of Oldnew Luna (that romance thing) and actually have it decently written for once. This entire thing is my first attempt at anything like this and I am thankful for the praise it has received, despite the downfalls it has. So what do you think?
549331 Is that an affirmative?
As long as the story Itself doesn't change I'd be ok with it.
549338 Maybe.
well... I like it the way it is but if you rewrite it (or have it rewritten) and you don't alter the sequel, I'll just stick with the old cannon that you made for this verse (I guess I could get around to reading the rewrite to I suppose). Otherwise I'll just start from scratch after I brain bleach the old info if you plan to alter what you have in the sequel as well
I think it's a great idea
Yeah, i'm
not good the whole romance/feels thingwriting what i mean in context, sorry about that. Always been good at making writing look more professional.I also apologize for taking forever to get through the last six or so chapters. I plan on finishing ch 17 tonight, if i can help it.
What i originally meant to say was, i'm not good at writing romance/feels, not about your question. But to answer it, if you think it needs to be done arandompenguin, then by Celly's beard, i'm on board.
549346 549349 I don't think the canon of the story will be altered, just that the majority of scenes will be more emotive and better written, especially the romance parts.
549350 Thanks for the feedback!
549348 I'm not sure if this counts as feedback...
549378 It's cool, neither am I, which is why I have this thing going on. And you're doing a great job, thanks again. Also, don't worry about delays, there is no real rush.
549401
I... actually went back and read what i wrote, realized what i probably said, and then finished editing it not ten seconds before you posted that, probably. Yet another apology today!
549401
that is the plan you have, but plans hardly go the way most people want them to unfortunately... Here's hoping
549405 It's fine once more, by some weird coincidence I misread your comment anyway and thought it said something about you yourself not being good with writing relationships/feels, which is what I think you were trying to get at anyways.
549410 Indeed. Well each edit is being run through me before being done to the fimfiction document, and I don't plan on altering the canon any more than necessary, so I think we're safe.
go for it.
549440 Thanks for the feedback!
549443 you're welcome.
as long as it not a huge change go ahead and i think more feels would be better so
549418
That is exactly what i was getting at, oddly enough.
549534 Thanks for the feedback!
549559 *Dramatic music plays*
I approve of this and i will re-read it once it's done.
I'm not sure if you remember, but i used to comments a lot back when you released your first few chapters, but i stopped reading when you left the romance behind, in a sense.
So this is a perfect oppurtunity for me to get back to reading Oldnew Luna.
Take care mate and Good luck.
I reckon that it would be fine if the main story didn't change but instead the romance between Luna and Twilight became more detailed (and by that i do not mean clop levels
). Otherwise I think that the whole thing will be amazing whichever way it ends up.
549703 Thanks for the feedback!
549664 Equestrialize! I do remember you, your frequent comments were a massive motivation for me, and I felt sad when you stopped, but your reasons are sound. Thanks for the feedback!
549751
Glad to hear my silly comments had a positive effect
When will the chapters get..their.. romance fix? Or are they already done?
549766 Ah, it likely won't be for a while yet as he's not just helping me with the romance scenes, but the entire story. Also, we haven't really started yet since we were waiting to see what everyone else said.
549792
Shame, i wanted to read it now
I guess i'll have to wait for that lovely little notification in my.. notifications box then.
yet again, Good luck, i'll be looking forward to the reworked story.
If this idea gets approved (seems well on the way) I'll be the one doing the re-writing, and would greatly appreciate any fan input, since this is Penguins story and I don't want to ruin anything for him or you as his fan base, I simply want to make the reading and/or re-reading as nice an experience as possible. Any good ideas as to how specific scenes could be done, how the re writing would be handled best, and feedback as it goes along would be awesome.
Peace out