Feb
16th
2012
Interference rewrite #2 (I dun derped) · 6:47am Feb 16th, 2012
So, after a rewrite on Interference, I decided to just make a new chapter with all my fixes, because for some reason I thought that would work better. When I deleted the old chapter, it apparently wiped out all my comments and views.
Oh well, live and learn.
The story has been revamped to combine the best of my "emo Celestia" first draft with my "YOU GONNA GET RAPED" second draft, although it leans towards the first. In any case, the folks I had look over it agree: this is the best version of the story so far.
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I liked the simplicity of the original and honestly did not find it emo. More annoyed Cellestia than emo. I never got to read the first rewrite. I honestly think it would have been a good idea to post the rewrites as additional chapters for alternat takes on the same premise.
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They were terrible. I'd rather people see the current state of the story.
For a while in there, there was just nothing. I would go to the story and there'd be some metadata suggesting that a story existed, but the chapter list would be blank and it would total up to zero words and you couldn't post any new comments.
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