Axtara – Banking and Finance Alpha 2 Call!

Woooo! It’s time!

So, readers, as some of you may have noticed, the Alpha 1 for Axtara – Banking and Finance is complete! Boo-yah! Changes have been made, chapters have been tucked, etc etc. But now, as you may have guessed from the title, it’s time for a second Alpha.

This one will go a lot quicker than the first. The goal here is just to see the results of the changes made on a new test audience, one that hasn’t read the story before.

That’s it, really. The prior group was pretty thorough. But the changes that were made have to be tested by readers that are blind to the overall story. I’m not even going to tell them what those changes were or where they are. I’m just going to drop the story on them and wait it out.

So then, this is an invite call. Feel like reading a YA Fantasy novel? One that’s not a titanic epic (Axtara is only 122,000 words long, or about the average length of a novel). One that has a dragon as the protagonist, with a plot about opening a bank?

Yes, it’s very fresh and original. You know me.

Anyway, this is an open call for Alpha 2 readers. It’s going to be fast, and it’s going to be furious. If you’d like to give it a go, leave a comment.

Also, if you’re an artist named Chromamancer and feeling like you’ve changed your mind, you’re still my first pick!

Fireteam Freelance feedback post tomorrow!

Comments

[Silverblade5]

I might be interested.

[Bugsydor]

Good luck on Alpha II: The Alphening. The first go-around was a blast.

[Viking ZX]

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Have you done any Alpha reading before?

[Silverblade5]

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Not recently. I am however experienced with giving general feedback and letting people know what I think.

[Viking ZX]

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Do you have the time to commit to a 122k read?

[Silverblade5]

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I do.

[Seirs]

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One might say it peeked great interest, and was good investment of time. I’d bank on it’s success.

[Viking ZX]

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All right, PM me an email address you'd like to have associated with your comments on Drive (it's all done through Google Drive) and that the master chapter link can be sent to. The Alpha 2 will be uploaded this weekend, with the calls going out this coming Monday.

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I’d bank on it’s success.

I certainly am, the way my economic situation has been with Covid going on!

[Seirs]

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Hopefully there will be a lot of interest. (Pun not intended this time till after writing)