EAsylum
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Mystery
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When Twilight Sparkle went to bed, she had friends she loved and a life she enjoyed. But she awoke to hospital gowns and padded restraints. And the doctors, they keep telling her that she is sick and none of it was real. They’re lying, right?
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Looking For Editing Help · 3:35pm Apr 20th, 2020

Sorry for the bother,

I was looking for some editing help on my stories, including the next chapter of Asylum, and I was also looking for some feedback on the stories in general to help me nail down some pernicious issues I've been facing.

Please PM me if you're willing and able to help. And let me offer my thanks ahead of time, because I do appreciate it all!

Sincerely,
Derek (aka DoD)

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Mix-up

Mix-up #1 · Apr 20th, 2020 · 8 · ·

Damn no luck with me but I am certainly looking forward to see your great story continuing again.

BronyWriter

BronyWriter #2 · Apr 20th, 2020 · · ·

Yeah, sure.

Diokno44

Diokno44 #3 · Apr 20th, 2020 · 2 · ·

I won't have time to help edit often, but good luck. I'm glad you're still around

RandomGuy101

RandomGuy101 #4 · Apr 20th, 2020 · · ·

Man, I wish I had the time for that, but I'm booked.

Daedalus Aegle

Daedalus Aegle #5 · Apr 20th, 2020 · 5 · ·

Reading this made me realize something. I too would be apologetic for writing a blog just to ask for help - but being on the other side, reading it, makes me see that there is nothing at all to apologize for. I'm just happy to see you're still around, and I'm sure everyone else is as well. So please, don't apologize, and I hope you get all the help you need.

Elitrino

Elitrino #6 · Apr 21st, 2020 · · ·

I can help if ya need

Reese

Reese #7 · Apr 21st, 2020 · · ·

Been a while, but I might be able to, at least with some of it. What sort of editing system and chapter lengths are you thinking of, what other stories (besides Asylum) are you thinking of, and what do you mean regarding general feedback?
And should we still take this to PMs, even though at the moment I'm just willing and able to consider helping and seek more information to aid that consideration?

MaxVive

MaxVive #8 · Apr 24th, 2020 · 5 · ·

I'd like to help. I've followed this story from the beginning and it would be good to see it concluded. I also have the time now due to current events.

Somber

Somber #9 · Apr 26th, 2020 · · ·

I can vouch for Reese. He's meticulous.

Tangerine Blast

Tangerine Blast #10 · Apr 28th, 2020 · · ·

I'm excited to see you still around! I would offer help but I'm booked at the moment. But I'll definitely be around to read any new stuff you put out!

Chromio