Some changes to the next chapter for "My Sister Cozy Glow"

So, I read "Business Trip" by AlwaysDressesinStyle. Aside from being just an amazing story, s/he gives an excellent tour of the New York City area. And as I've never lived in NYC nor visited there for a long time, I don't think I would be able to give as nearly as engaging of a picture of NYC as s/he does.

So, Spur and her family will not be going to Manehattan, but Bitsburgh. AKA Pittsburgh. Which is only briefly mentioned in the MLP universe, but I think I could make it work. Instead of the Manehattan Times, it'll be the Post-Gazette. Instead of Central Park, it'll be Schenley Park/Frick Park. And so on.

And I'll have some fun with Spur's parents trying to walk up the hills when Spur can just fly up.
Side note, I imagine Bitsburgh would have a pegasus majority despite being on the ground, due to the hilly topography.

Still working on the next chapters. They will probably be posted some time next week. I have a choral concert tonight, and I will also be going for a checkup related to some health issues in a few days and I'm dealing with some anxiety related to that.

The next installment will probably be two shorter chapters, uploaded at the same time.

Thanks for your patience. Hope to see y'all soon!

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[Dragon Turtle]

Side note, I imagine Bitsburgh would have a pegasus majority despite being on the ground, due to the hilly topography.

I always find that sort of thing fascinating.