Just a notice and a question

I've decided to write normally, but edit my chapters later to include a ton more description. At the moment, I've about half finished the first chapter, which has jumped over 1k words from the almost 2k words it originally was.

I noticed I was writing more similarly to the translated webnovels I've been reading in recent years, than the descriptive western novels I remember reading when I was younger.

I'd rather write like the second than the first, but it's not so easy for me to just 'DO'. So I've decided to keep doing it how I am doing it, trying to add a bit more description as I write, and overhauling it later.

So from now on, please consider chapters, of the story once called 'undecided' and now called 'Heavens' War: Indecision', a rough draft or web-novel version. Something I could pump out once a day if I wanted, and was doing, and plan to start doing (taking breaks when I feel like it to edit or read or whatever)

Anyways, onto my question, not that I think many people will see this in time to answer it. Can I please get a bit more feedback? I've gotten nine likes and one conversation in the comments. I'm not asking for a shower of praise, observant comments would be awesome, questions would be great, corrections would be appreciated, and the occasional hater would probably liven up my day a little.

The silence is boring, that's all.