Rumble and Applebloom aren't happy with their current bodies, and try an enhancement potion to improve them! The results... have unintended consequences...
Wanted to give this story a signal boost as I've been following it and would greatly recommend it as a solid growth story. Gent even used my art as the cover pic.
I think it's been long enough. I'm gonna tally up the votes for Hot Swap and go from there. I'll give a 24hr deadline for any last minute inputs though.
A writer and member of this site Lotus Moon did a very nice audio reading of Hot Pink! One of my first fics written all the way back in 2011. If you liked the fic, I bet you will definitely enjoy listening to this audio reading.
Hello you thousand or so ppl who have subscribed to this horse person. I'm pleased to announce that i'm kind of alive again with writing. It's been a long time, but I was born a writer, a reader, and a lover of words and snappy dialogue so I am pleased to pronounce my tentative return to horsewords! If you know my stories of past, you'll come to expect the content.... or will you~
I think it's been long enough. I'm gonna tally up the votes for Hot Swap and go from there. I'll give a 24hr deadline for any last minute inputs though.
I think you can leave all your ending options like they already are, since each is not bad and does not ruin the feeling of the story as a whole.