Jan
7th
2019
Editing Chapters · 12:47am Jan 7th, 2019
I'm going to be editing old chapters of A Lonely Star, and most likely unpublishing the later chapters, since I don't like the direction I was originally heading in. It may be a while before new chapters crop back up, as I'll make sure that I draft them more thoroughly on FIM fiction rather than leaving them to be edited and stored on another platform prone to the random whims of the rest of my imagination.
... Does this count as a rewrite?
In any case, this is just a heads up, rather than letting the story sit in some maddening silence for an undetermined amount of time.
Yes? No? Maybe?
There are always things that we regret later on.
Do what you think is right
your story, your rules
Thanks for the update
I liked it okay. In fact, is there a way I could get a copy of the old story? Or do you not have it anymore?
I look forward to where you take it from here. I do think Twilight's friends were behaving a little too selfishly in the old one, but I also think Twilight had a right to feel a little angry in the movie, even if she shouldn't have said what she did.
By the way, do you know when the next chapter will be? Again, looking forward to it.
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I haven't deleted the old chapters, per say, but I have been editing them. I don't know how coherently they'll read at this point in time, and I'm thinking I should just scrap all but chapters 1 and 2, but they still hold elements of the original.
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be, or when a new chapter will be out. I was hoping to just edit and be done with it so I can move on to newer chapters, but a rewrite of the previously existing chapters still sound more and more appealing.