Chapter 3 Rewrites · 1:29pm Jul 9th, 2018
I'm starting. It'll be the first of a few that I will be redoing from scratch. The re-written version will clean up some logic issues.
Unfortunately, I cannot for the life of me come up with a good enough reason for Sunset to bring Nyx to her place and not inform anyone about her. So if you have idea's that can help me rationalize that so Sunset isn't a kidnapper then I'm all for it.
I should also let you all know that despite my beginning to work on the story again, doesn't mean my full attention is back on it. My priority is another fic which I shan't name now. I am having considerable difficulty in writing this fic so I hope rewriting Nyx and the Sunset will help me find my mojo.
I am so sorry to keep getting your hopes up every time and being unreliable.
Have it maybe someone is trying to kill her as well just cause they are crazy and Sunset can't go to the police yet cause the killer has a plant in the system if you know what I mean even threatening to have anyone close to her killed or life ruined if she says anything? Sunset to protect her would have to bring her to her home since wherever she came from is gone now?
Ah, the age-old enemy of the writer: writer's block. Don't worry, you're not alone here. I've got tons of ideas where I hit a logic issue. It takes time to conquer those particular issues, and your true fans will understand that and patiently await your work.
Anyone who can't respect a writer needs time to do his work is, on some level, an idiot.