Queen Of The Netherworld - Part IV [UPDATE] · 4:44am Feb 3rd, 2018
This is delayed for the reason that I want to make it really special and fun and hopefully make it the longest part yet. To get an idea of the scary fun to come, and to give you something for the intended release date, here's the synopsis as it appears in the story description and super brief snippets of what I have written so far. WARNING: Might be spoilers, might not be. Depends on what you classify as a spoiler.
SYNOPSIS
Part IV - "Something Sweet To Bite" - Scheduled for late Saturday or Sunday
The Candy Mare manifests into her new form and sets her sights on the Mane 6 and their demonic protector who take refuge in the abandoned Castle Of The Two Sisters. Things get worse when the Candy Mare summons her Candy Ghouls to hunt down and kill the Mane 6...
SNIPPETS
"Fluttershy!" Pinks gasped, diving forward to grab the mare's hand as she fell through the floor. Grabbing the mare's hand, she let out a grunt as she tried to pull up. "Come on..." she grunted. "Don't let g--" She was cut off when Fluttershy's hand slipped and she fell. "Flutters!" Pinks yelled, reaching out to her with wide eyes.
The unicorn did her best to keep up with the demon's pace as she looked back to see the fillies close by. She then looked way down at the entrance to see the Candy Mare standing there, eyes glowing purple as she raised her sharp claws, waving to her. Twilight let out a gasp when she was suddenly thrown into a room. Kyra then waited for the fillies to enter before she ran into the room. As she did, the Candy Mare rushed at her and swiped her candy cane claws at her. Letting out a yell, Kyra kicked her away and closed the steel door with a thud. She then raised her hand as dust shifted and hardened, closing off all sections where air could get into the room.
The Candy Mare stood outside the door with a grin on her face, running her clawed hand down the door. After reveling in the pained sounds and terrified screams, she left to go find the others.
"I want you to find them..." the sweet-tasting mare cooed. "and I want you to cut them. I will take great pleasure in making them my slaves."
When she was about to leave, she heard a scuffling from the hall. Letting out a gasp, she took cover behind a broken statue. When she stood, it came up to her chest, so she was able to kneel behind it. Peeking out, she saw a mare stumble into the room. The pink mare let out a soft gasp when she saw that the mare was made of candy. It wasn't the Candy Mare, though. It looked like she used to be a normal mare but was candified to look similar to her mistress. Upon hearing the gasp, the Candy Ghoul turned its head to look towards Pinkamena, who quickly hid herself from view again.
I cant wait it sounds so good but take your time i want it to be good