The first twelve chapters of Turnabout Storm have been updated... · 1:46pm Jan 30th, 2018
Everything through the end of the first day of trial (part 12) has been completely revamped. The chapters have been carefully edited and expanded to include additional detail and dialogue, and use a lighter touch on the early shipping. I also dramatically cut back on overuse of Lavender Unicorn Syndrome (or Violet Unicorn Syndrome in this case--it really made me grimace rereading this how often I did it back then), fixed some of the more stilted lines, added a few additional Ace Attorney game references, and even put in new evidence graphics borrowed directly from the videos. Last but not least, I added a few things that reference events that happen later in the story or even TLaTU.
Feel free to check out the changes, and I would like to know what folks think. I'm down with the flu right now, so I wouldn't mind a few comments while I'm convalescing.
woah holy shit. I had it in read later, so I guess the first time I've read it will be the revamped.
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Well, it's going to take me a while to completely go through the story to edit everything--many months, in fact, given the sheer number of words and chapters--but if you want to start now with the first 12 chapters, feel free. I wouldn't mind hearing the opinion of someone coming in cold to the updated version of how they like it.
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Of course. I will when I have time.