Chapter 1 rewritten

For all who have read the chapter, both those who continued after and those who may not have , Chapter 1 has now been rewritten. Its not essential to read it again, you wont really miss anything if you dont read it but I think its quality has been improved, information is far clearer, and tone more appropriate for the story should hopefully be established.

Various foreshadowing and connections have been written in and now no longer a wall of text exists so...yay?

Anyway, check it out if you want, maybe youll like it now lmao