Oct
21st
2012
Rough Draft of Chapter 4 Complete; Posting Soon · 1:07am Oct 21st, 2012
I have just completed the rough draft of Chapter 4 of "Beyond the Goddess Within." Since much of it was written in one sitting, however, I want to go over it a bit more before I post it. Hopefully it'll be online within the next 12-24 hours.
And hopefully you'll need to change out of your clothes after you read it. 
Your Master of Bation,
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Your story is great, over the top and sexy. But you need more anal sex and breast play. Come on, man. Dat Apple Plot...
... is my body ready?
Obligatory first.
There. I fulfilled my obligation.
Anyways thanks for the update. It's good to know you're making progress.
Edit: It would appear I took to long to post and my first was denied. No matter.
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IT'S ON.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56651/4/Beyond-The-Goddess-Within/Chapter-4%3A-Playtime
Oh and why would I need to change my cloths?
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They might get---messy.
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Why are we going into a sewer man I get tired of killing an endless sea of rats.
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Because that's where I have Rarity tied up, an apple jammed between her jaws held in place by leather straps. She's waiting for us. But I've got dibs on her marehood; you can have her ass.
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What now why did you put her down there for?
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So she'll be so happy to see us, thinking we'll let her go, that she won't mind when we put it in.
Geez, get with the program.
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No because its fun to mess with you by pretending that I have no idea what your talking about when in fact I do.
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LOL I know.
I hope that doesn't mean we're done. I didn't even tell you about the blue nipple clips I'm bringing.
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Uh oh this does not bode well retreat! <runs away>
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Darnit you saw through my ruse your craftier than I thought Truly you are very fascinating.
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did not expect it lol.
My body was not ready.
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Oh, hello there ILovePortalz.
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