Cruising revisions · 11:34am Dec 20th, 2017
So I’ve been working on Cruising and most of the edits have been a few different words here or there or expanding on ideas that were poorly explained. So far only a couple of hundred words added. Biology and the two confessions were the most changed (Getting AJ’s accent back under control, giving a more logical flow of events in Biology, etc) but Shopping has some added material to it regarding the sudden blossoming of the mental link part of their bond.
Including one of Sunny’s fantasies.
Later I may have a new chapter bringing Zesty and Sugarcoat back. It’s a small ship despite its size and even with them gigging on it, I’m sure they have time to rub elbows with the girls. And it establishes Lemon’s skill on a drum kit which I expand later in Classified which leads to an as yet to be planned Lemon x Flash story.
I really love going back and picking up little bits and pieces of stories and tying them into new things, don’t you?
Also working on a Christmas one shot and offered to proof BlackWater’s Christmas tradition when it’s ready. BW’s been a busy bee, working on Notes, Queen, and the annual Christmas story. I look forward to it all and so should you! 
Also, Novel Idea recently released the contributor list for Sunlight Sliders II and I’m in it! We’ve got thirty six contributors this year and it’s sure to be a blast. If you haven’t read the original one, please do! Novel has some great stories, and I’ve enjoyed the ones I’ve read thus far, especially his RariLight The Tarnished Crown.
Anyway, lots to do today and if you don’t hear from me again before then, happy Christmas to you all of you celebrate it, and wishes for a joyous. New Year for all.
We gonna sunlight sliders together! I'm very hype about it!
Hopefully after this we can continue to work together on other stuff as well :)
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Er sorry, this was meant to go on your main userpage