What will happen to Dylan? · 5:02am Dec 5th, 2017
I need an opinion... It has come to my attention that some people don't like time skips. Later on in the story, I was going to do a three years later thing for Dylan, making him 18. After a few chapters I would get him into a sex scene...
BUT... What do you guys think? Should Dylan go through his puberty phase instead of me skipping to him at 18? It would make the story MUCH longer.
Honestly... I wouldn't mind working on the story longer. It would give Dylan more character development.
What do you guys think?
Well, if you Think he would have more Deployment, do it.
Longer is better.
I think that letting Dylan's relationship with his new family develop more would be good.
Having Dylan interacts with different ponies, maybe make a some friends or a even a rival would be nice.
And if your going to do a time skip, doing so after a small story arc would be good, maybe after Dylan getting his cutie mark or whatever you think would work out.
Longer is fine, you'll have more chance to develop his relationships. Going from just meeting amber harvest to sex in a time skip would also skip the dating part.