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Shimmer_Bolt


To write is to create entire universes. You are a god. But will you be a kind god or a cruel god? Unfortunately, many are cruel, simply to entertain other gods.

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  • 70 weeks
    New Directions

    I've decided to start working more on the Fallout fic and even rewriting Where the Apples Grow. It's come to my attention that it's been years since I've started here on Fimfiction and I have definitely improved, so you can expect new chapters as well as reworks of older chapters in Redemption is Magic.

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  • 98 weeks
    Bread.

    Bread.

    4 comments · 212 views
  • 107 weeks
    Current Update

    We had initially planned to end the Fluttershy Arc in the current chapter, but after some debate, we had decided it would be better to create more buildup. Zone's character had not been fleshed out and I had originally wanted to show more of her viewpoints and emotions. Luckily, with some urgency from one of our editors, we have been able to agree upon extending this arc due to a lack of buildup

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  • 116 weeks
    I'm not dead.

    My current silence is due to a living situation that is currently changing. I will soon be able to work on the stories again.

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  • 133 weeks
    B R E A D

    Y'all ever just eat bread?

    2 comments · 211 views
Dec
5th
2017

What will happen to Dylan? · 5:02am Dec 5th, 2017

I need an opinion... It has come to my attention that some people don't like time skips. Later on in the story, I was going to do a three years later thing for Dylan, making him 18. After a few chapters I would get him into a sex scene...

BUT... What do you guys think? Should Dylan go through his puberty phase instead of me skipping to him at 18? It would make the story MUCH longer.

Honestly... I wouldn't mind working on the story longer. It would give Dylan more character development.

What do you guys think?

Comments ( 4 )

Well, if you Think he would have more Deployment, do it.

Longer is better.:twilightsmile:

I think that letting Dylan's relationship with his new family develop more would be good.

Having Dylan interacts with different ponies, maybe make a some friends or a even a rival would be nice.

And if your going to do a time skip, doing so after a small story arc would be good, maybe after Dylan getting his cutie mark or whatever you think would work out.

Longer is fine, you'll have more chance to develop his relationships. Going from just meeting amber harvest to sex in a time skip would also skip the dating part.

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