Working on Ch. 2

Heyho!

I'm awful glad that the start of The Storm Passes didn't end up being bad. Y'know how hard it is to tell when you're talking about your own writing, after all. I've been eagerly bearing into the next chapter (probably about the same length, if not longer), and I wanted to express my sincere appreciation for y'all taking the time to read my work. And, if the next chapter ends up being trash, take heart, because my first instinct was to start it with a dream sequence, so no matter how poorly it comes out, it could have been worse.

I really want to stress that I do intend for the story to focus on Tempest and Twilight's perspective. I know that might not have fully come across, due to the nature of the first chapter being so.... broad. Just know that I plan to focus on a tighter perspective, on the whole. A lot less of entire paragraphs describing reactions

And please, DO tell me the things that you find wrong about my writing! Noticing them myself will doubtlessly take five times as long, if I even notice them at all . Please comment, or just PM me, and let me know anything that jumps out at you, however small! You'd be a huge help to me

Love Y'all!
-DiscoGuy