Polyamory · 1:30pm Oct 30th, 2017
The most recent chapter was as far as I planned, aside from some potential one-shot spin-offs maybe. I have the impression that people might want a more well-rounded ending though. How would you guys like to see it end? Anything you'd like to see?
Only idea I've seen I think is getting Shining alicorned so that he doesn't have to get old and eventually die of a heart attack from getting banged by horny immortals. I could just have them bang him until he sprouts them, but if he became one, I'd rather he actually earn it in a legit way with kinky stuff happening in between. Also since obviously this timeline is different, a lot of things might work out in different ways. We still have the black vines and everything after that still going to happen. Might be something better suited for a multi-chapter sequel than an individual chapter. Again, what do you think?
Also thinking of how new-style changelings would come about in this world. Maybe Thorax would become one, spread it to a few others, and Chrysalis would panic thinking there was some kind of crayola plague. That's more of a one-shot spinoff though I think.
Maybe Alicorns have a stronger effect on their offspring than Chrysalis anticipated, and her new Changelings are born pastel-colored?
Speaking of new Changelings, I would like to see Cadance (post Flurry Heart's birth) dominating a bound Chrysalis and riding her ovipositor. Drawing those eggs out of her. Slowly.
Also, on an unrelated note, can Changeling eggs successfully incubate in rectal cavities?
I think it would be funny if by the Changelings just started becoming pastel colored becuase they are interacting with the ponies openly so much. Chrysalis has no clue that it could happen and starts going crazy because she thinks that she is loosing her subjects. Plus you could have her go through the process and she how she likes it!
How about just NOT doing the whole Crayola changelings? Seriously, that was the third most idiotic decision Hasbro made with the show.
Honestly, I like the idea of Shining being fucked into alicornication. That would be hilarious rather than some heroic deed. Just fucking a bunch of alicorns and a bug monster turning him into an alicorn. Especially if none of his wives expect it and panic as he vanishes in a flash of light mid-orgy, thinking they literally fucked him to death.
Also, a non-clop epilogue featuring the birth of his children would be nice.
Oh! And more Spike! Have him grow up and be more involved in the herd!
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That's always a valid option, just not doing it, but not doing it could work into the story. It could be funny to have Chrysalis freak out about it and everyone treat it as a horrible disease that needed cured instead of a benefit. Then they find a way to reverse it and are all relieved that they stopped the horrible crayon plague. I'd have to think of a good and/or funny way to reverse it of course.
Shining just disappearing during an orgy could be funny as well. They'd have to figure out whose realm he went to, I'd have to think about how that'd work too!
An epilogue with the foals, yes, that should be done as well. Pretty sure I thought of that and then forgot. I'm bad with that.
Was thinking about a one-shot story in the same universe for Spike. Especially since getting laid fairly regularly would make him better equipped to put the moves on Ember when he met her. Or could dominate Garble for the hell of it, or order Garble to give head to every dragon he meets and not tell them why.
Oh, definitely. There is no way you're going to make it feel like he's earned it in one chapter. There's no groundwork to make him the alicorn of anything other than sex or breeding. Which he isn't going to become in any other way than "banging until he sprouts one" and also Cadance and Chrysalis are already that and the others basically too.
If immortality is the main concern though, there's other options. Twilight could do it with some flavor of Science. Can sell his soul to a succubus for immortality, can retcon Chrysalis into one, or play up the goddess aspect of Cadance for the same. Heck, you acknowledged the Twilight being dead thing, Celestia could just turn him around on the astral plane when he dies.
Double heck, have Chrysalis turn him into a changeling then he ascends into a Neo Changeling King instead of Thorax.
Given that the rationale behind it is a changeling forming genuine connections with people for the first time, it'd be fitting for Chrysalis to become a neo changeling herself, after getting too emotional while together with the others in her own throne room, accidentally destroying the throne and transforming.
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I'm certain she would hate it. Though at least we do have the less crayola looking option for the guard class changelings now. Maybe I'd do a poll to see if they keep it or reverse it at the end; I think treating it like a disease to be cured could be funnier.
Hmm Also something with Rarity and Spike may be interesting.
The idea that the changeling born out of an alicorn/Celestia get technicolor is hilarious, and worth exploring, mainly for the reaction of Chrys ^^
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I could probably do a ton of stories of everyone in that relationship impregnating everyone else. Chrysalis probably wants to get them all at least once.
I guess she could plant eggs in a rectal cavity, though I imagine that'd be uncomfortable and not allow them to obtain genetic material from the impregnated. Or maybe it would cause magic? I don't know!
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I don't think I'd need to retcon Chrysalis for the succubus idea, since that's what I imagined her as already. Given that her species is new and she's the first of her kind, she may have powers she hadn't figured out yet. It might also be interesting to have him obtain it in an unexpected way. It mentioned before when Celestia and Luna were talking that most ponies couldn't survive the process of having their soul yanked out and put into a new body, and that's why it'd be dangerous to make Shining one before he was properly prepared. Maybe Twilight and Chrysalis could work together to find another solution
As with the changelings transforming, I'm still debating as to whether to let that happen or have it be something they mistake for a disease and try to reverse. Probably has some humor potential even if not extremely kinky.
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I assume getting gangbanged by immortals would do wonders for Spike's confidence, so he'd be a lot more likely to be the actual moves on Rarity. Also I could see Chrysalis or maybe Cadance helping out by telling Rarity what an amazing tongue he has. Or maybe sex with Rarity could be his next birthday present! Maybe I could eventually have Spike, Rarity, Ember, and Thorax form their own poly relationship. More interspecies action!
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Hm that rings quite nice. Especially if the two dragons gets some hoard and size up some ^^
Obvioulsy I think that the "Friendly visits" with the royal family may spill onto the others.
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I think needing gametes (egg or sperm cells) to "harvest genetic material" would be a weird (though suitably kinky) restriction of the magic involved. Technically, somatic cells, say from the intestinal lining, should work just as well. (As would the uterine lining, for that matter.)
If anything, the major problem I see is avoiding intestinal blockage. Also, if the eggs hatch in the intestines, the grubs would be in a rather unhygienic environment. As I'm not a fan of scat, I wouldn't mind this getting ignored or handwaved away, though.
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I had a poor opinion of the "Changedlings" following the last season finale, as well. The S7 episodes involving them turned my view around, though. 🙂
Derpibooru has a lot of neat images of a changed Chrysalis, most of them under the "purified chrysalis" tag. Some hilarious, some gorgeous, even fierce; evoking the impression of a fay queen.
I'd vote for keeping at least a few of our new Crayola bugs around. Chrysalis herself can stay/return to her holey black self, if she insists.
I've always seen the holes as a sign of chronic malnutrition; their bodies figuratively devouring themselves. The Changedlings notably lack them. Perhaps they would eventually close for well-fed normal Changelings, as well.
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I assume if Chrysalis changed, it'd be the badass form like Thorax's brother rather than the crayola form, so might not be too bad for her. That wouldn't be as funny though as having the poor thing turn into a fruit and panic about it.
If I were going to have, say, Chrysalis impregnate Shining, I'd probably have them use magic to make him female, impregnate him, then use magic to turn him back male except for the womb holding it. They they'd have to teleport the thing out when it was time so it didn't chestburst him. I think they have enough wombs in the relationship to not need to do that though.
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Please do this. It sounds absolutely hilarious. Just imagine how all the already-pastel-colored ponies react to the horrible, horrible new changeling plague:
Spike: "Oh Celestia, Thorax, what happened? There's no way I can get a boner with you looking like that!"
Celestia: "Oh. My. ME. Chryssie! We have to do something! They're even more colorful than me!"
Twilight: *uncontrollable vomiting any time she sees a transformed changeling* *Sees Chrysalis doing something disgusting with her tongue and sighs in relief*
Shining: "Oh mare, my penis has inverted. I don't think I can ever have sex again after seeing that!" Shining's wives: *Enraged/horrified screaming*
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Add Trixie and Glimglam to that list and you have the second best herd/harem ever.
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I would probably put Trixie and Starlight into their own relationship that included Sunburst and Maud. Though you're right, Spike X Glimmer is also a thing.
I guess there are a lot of potential poly groups. Like Rainbow x several Wonderbolts. Or we could pair Big Mac with everypony he's been shipped with, so Cheerilee, Marble, and Sugar Belle. Add Fleetfoot to that if you want to count the comics, though she fell in love with him due to a head injury so not sure if that counts. Or since Discord can make copies of himself, we could ship Fluttershy x Discord x Discord x Discord x Discord
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I don't know why, but I see Rainbow having a reverse harem. I mean her and a bunch of stallions. Soarin', Big Mac, and Thunderlane, to name a few.
I still like the idea of "alicorns are only female" and Shining finds that out the hard way, buuuuuuut I can see how it probably wouldn't work for this particular universe.
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I do like to write about rabidly mare-dominated societies sometimes to balance out all the series with the opposite, but I'll probably stick to it being slightly mare dominated in this world.
Hmm, maybe Chrysalis will eventually attempt to create another Queen like herself? Perhaps that could be an opportunity for Crayolalings. Definitely an opportunity insert some fun into other groups, like aged-up CMC, Flurry Heart and/or the Cake twins.
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So like Polyamory: The Next Generation where Flurry Heart bags the CMC and Cake twins?
That'd be a neat idea, but would have to think of a way to make it significantly different before I really considered it.
id like to see an ending chapter set a little into the future. after sending all their kids off to school shining and his wives just have a massive love-orgy to finish it all off. though I do hope your not ending this anytime soon. im really enjoying the way your story plays out...not just the sexy times!!!