Jul
18th
2017
Small changes · 7:23am Jul 18th, 2017
As you guys can see I've made some small changes to the first chapter:
1) I stopped using the 2nd person to make "general truths", since it sounded weird.
2) Vinyl's THOUGHTS are now written in italic (thanks to Flufux for the tip). It will be easier for you guys to understand who's talking/thinking, and I won't have to write "Vinyl thought" anymore....
Yeah I could've thought of this earlier but I just didn't.
Note that Vinyl's text messages won't be written in italic, to differentiate them from the thoughts.
Anyway, thanks again for your support and advices, it means a lot to me!
Bisous,
Saga.
