TA Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Drama
Slice of Life
Tragedy
A once well respected resident of Ponyville has been released from prison for a false crime. But being as almost all of the townsfolk still believe he did it, it maybe a bit more difficult to get this pony back on his feet. Will the Mane Six succeed?
Gore
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Luna
Sapphire Shores
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Raptormon132 · 134k words · 103 27 · 3.9k views

A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner Changes Are Complete. · 12:05pm Jul 2nd, 2017

Hey, guys.
Raptormon132 here. I just wanted to let you know that I've just recently finished the changes to the story. I'll list some of the changes I made.

1. I've added a few new additional characters. They are Detective Chief Superintendent Open Case, Detective Inspector Under Cover, and Investigator Tough Job, the investigation team from Sydneigh that formed a secret task force with Lawful Eye against Canterlot investigation force and Hoofstrong Prison Centre corruption, conspiracy ring, that they dubbed "Task Force River".

Note: Task Force River is a reference to "Task Force Snowy", which is the name of a special team of detectives in Sydney, Australia that investigated the string of gangland murders in the 1980s.

2. I've added something that Turncoat does to clear the names of all the innocent victims of the Canterlot investigation force and Hoofstrong Prison Centre. And it's something I thought I was missing. He duplicates the real case file with a advanced duplication spell, and teleports them to a secret cellar he constructed himself with a teleportation spell in the forest outside of Hoofstrong Prison, while the duplicate is destroyed by Armstrong without Armstrong knowing. But it took him 2 whole years to practice and master those 2 spells to a level where he could do them both simultaneously without being caught. This explains how Lawful Eye cleared Abacus's name, and proved his innocence. The purpose of the first two were to not make Lawful Eye seem like (as the rage reviewer described her as) a "Fixer Sue". And to have the character Turncoat have a more active, double agent type role similar to Severus Snape from Harry Potter. In fact, he was inspired by that character.

3. I took out the foreshadowings. Like Lawful Eye say that most of the prisoners at Hoofstrong were innocent. I changed it to something else to avoid the spoiler for new readers.

Well, those are some of the things I changed, and added. Do re-read it guys ,and tell me what you think.
Enjoy!