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  • 596 weeks
    105 upvotes... Wow... Also-discussion/suggestions- Say what you wish...

    Well... that escalated steadily...

    Anyways, this is the place for my readers to discuss with me or with each other what they like so far, where I could improve, or what I could possibly do in the future.

    Do realize that I probably won't use most suggestions(outside of one-off jokes or members of the Apple Family). But, all feedback is greatly appreciated.

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  • 597 weeks
    Feedback still desired, but... nearly 100 upvotes...

    Getting so close... 97 upvotes. Just want it to reach one hundred soon. I would like for it to be over 100 by the end of tonight. That would be awesome.


    Anyway, like I always say, don't be afraid to comment on it if you like it. I will answer any questions that you may have about the story except what happens next. Tell me what you liked. Tell me what you didn't.

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    4 comments · 460 views
  • 597 weeks
    About the first chapter... Feedback is desired.

    Well, it took a month to write, and a week to type up... An additional two weeks or so to get it fully edited, and, finally, I got it out after a while.

    About the chapter itself...

    I think the major criticism was the letters at the end.

    While I can't rightly go back and take them out...

    I have made some edits to fix it up a bit. And to use it more towards a joke.

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  • 597 weeks
    Hey...

    I noticed I have quite a few more favorites than upvotes on A Spark Between them.

    Seriously, if you can find the time, comment on it. I would greatly appreciate it.

    And, please, go thank my editors and pre-readers. They deserve it for putting up with me.

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  • 598 weeks
    A Spark Between Them- Now in moderation.

    Here it is while it awaits approval.

    Don't forget to comment.

    EDIT: Nevermind. It is out.

    Guest Pre-reader of SleeplessBrony.

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Oct
6th
2012

Upcoming TwiMac Story · 9:24pm Oct 6th, 2012

Yes, I am writing a TwiMac story.

Now, you guys have a few guys to thank for this one. First, we have NightsGlory. He and I and another one of his readers were having a conversation about how well Big Mac and Shining Armor would get along... somehow, I mentioned that the two of them would fight crime. I tried to write a story like that.

I failed.

From its ashes, rose the story. I will make several references to his story. In fact, there are a few similarities, but just as many differences.

Second, you have SleeplessBrony to thank. He and I have very similar writing styles... though sheer coincidence. There are other reasons to thank him, especially considering the content. Seriously, you will notice the similarities between his style and mine... Present tense, varying sentences, various things we both take from Stephen King, in small ways. He would be my pre-reader for this, if he weren't so busy writing. His words. Which is really awesome to hear.

Next, you can thank FlimFlamBros, as he has been my springboard, as has blm. These two have been the ones who I can bounce ideas off of for this. Although, FlimFlam has been an asshole, a large portion of the time, he has been a helpful asshole.

Fourth, you have Bronius Maximus to thank, because he is also an influence on this, as well. He liked the idea of the crime fighting. He is also rather awesome, and I hope he reads this story.


Now, I need some pre-readers. If you want to offer your services, please send me a PM. I would like for at least NightsGlory to be among my pre-readers.

Last but not least, I would like to make a declaration.

Path_of_cloud has no modesty. That is all.

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Looking forward to seeing what you come out with, man!

And yes, Bronius Maximus is a pretty cool guy. I'm pretty sure is story At Home On the Range (as well as the sequel) motivated me to get up off my ass (or sit on it, as 'twere) and write my stuff.

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Thank you.

The exact same thing applies here for this story. As is, I have gotten a bit written.

I have also been busy looking up breeds of apples and converting them to ponies.

It has been rather time-consuming.

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