Feedback still desired, but... nearly 100 upvotes... · 10:00pm Dec 8th, 2012
Getting so close... 97 upvotes. Just want it to reach one hundred soon. I would like for it to be over 100 by the end of tonight. That would be awesome.
Anyway, like I always say, don't be afraid to comment on it if you like it. I will answer any questions that you may have about the story except what happens next. Tell me what you liked. Tell me what you didn't.
Say something about all of the sexual metaphors and allegories. Do an in-depth analysis... Crack a joke! Please. I love reading humorous comments.
And be sure to thank my editors and pre-readers. They have to put up with me, which is a herculean task in itself. Honestly, they deserve a ton of thanks.
Also, I will take the time to integrate the newest episode into the story. Not at all hard. It was along the lines I would have gone with, anyway.
In fact, you could say it adds a very interesting level of depth to chapter one, alone!
Hey here's an idea, instead of wasting time with asking for feedback on a chapter that's been out for awhile, why not STOP WASTING TIME AND START WORKING ON THE NEXT BUCKING CHAPTER!!!!!
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Have been.
I have also been working on projects, at the same time.
I can't get too far ahead, because Wonderbolts Academy will have an effect on this chapter.
589117 of course it would... god forbid anyone does anyhting origninal...
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The episode comes out next week. I probably won't reach the point where it would affect it before the episode comes out.